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You Love Me Completely

I am so happy; my heart and soul is filled with bliss.You love me completely as I am. Accepting all of my flaws. I love to get lost in your warm embrace. It's my safe haven and my most special place. No outsiders can influence what we share. Our love cocoon is special and sacred. I love when you gaze at me, I can feel it in my soul. When we are apart, my heart bleeds; l love our nightly rendezvous. I love to bask in your manly aroma. Your scent is amazing; it puts me on cloud nine, my love. I can't get enough of you. Kiss me, darling, until it's time to get up in the morning. Then I wake up alone in a bed of one. 06/18/2021 Contest: Suprise Me Sponsor: Charles Messina

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/6/2021 2:16:00 PM

Alexis, this pulls on the old heartstrings! Congratulations! Here's to the wish your heart makes coming true!

Beata Agustin

Date: 7/5/2021 6:41:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... with "surprising ending" expressing your "poetic humor." God bless you.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/3/2021 12:31:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. A magical write. What a dream you had. Have a blessed day/weekend..................

Charles Messina

Date: 7/3/2021 9:03:00 AM

Alexis, like Gershon said : It's almost too good to be true" I love this poem and the surprise ending was fabulous. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Charlie

Alexis Y.
Date: 7/3/2021 10:28:00 AM

Hi Charlie, You held a good contest. I appreciate my placement. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

David Kavanagh

Date: 6/21/2021 2:19:00 PM

Heya Alexis, this is great for the contest, a passionate dream, what a great surprise, It’s great fun taking the reader for a ride, and you certainly do it with flair, in this wonderful poem, Best of luck, cheers David

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/20/2021 6:55:00 PM

When it's too good to be true ~ sometimes it isn't... as your poem proves! :) gw

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/20/2021 7:44:00 AM

Yes, the ending was a surprise so it should be a good contender in the contest. Way to go. I enjoyed reading your passionate dream. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Supraja Kannan

Date: 6/19/2021 8:10:00 AM

Such a moving piece, Alexis...

Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/19/2021 4:28:00 AM

That's a really sad surprise ending, Alexis, well penned:)

Laura Leiser

Date: 6/18/2021 8:47:00 PM

You set up the love and longing so well, and then the surprise ending! Such a great contrast that pulls at the emotions…well done, Alexis! Good luck with the contest! :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/18/2021 1:57:00 PM

Certainly a surprise ending. Creatively themed my friend. All the best, Alexis.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/18/2021 1:30:00 PM

An anticlimactic ending that certainly achieved its purpose: The unexpected! Good luck with the contest, my dearest Alexis. Hugs xxx

Jan Allison

Date: 6/18/2021 1:25:00 PM

aww Alexis I wasnt expecting such a sad ending, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 6/18/2021 12:33:00 PM

WoW! What a surprise ending. Surely wasn't expecting that. All the best for contest. Enjoy your weekend

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 6/18/2021 11:48:00 AM

Hi Alexis, First a portrait of a cherished love affair is drawn though your awesome imagery, then the poem builds up to an ending, where it isn't real. You did a marvelous job writing this verse. I was certainly surprised by the ending, too. Have a lovely day, Evelyn :=)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/18/2021 11:15:00 AM

Hello Alexis Y., reading your poem had me going, until I reache the end. the ending is so sad. Enjoy your day my friend.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/18/2021 10:04:00 AM

A romantic verse with sadly not the ending you were hoping for. Best of luck in the contest and enjoy your weekend Alexis. Tom

L Milton Hankins

Date: 6/18/2021 9:55:00 AM

Well, you certainly surprised me! I enjoyed the beauty and flow of your phrases, then...oops..."alone in a bed of one?" Good job, Alexis!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/18/2021 9:43:00 AM

ohhh, a sad ending. And it was all seeming so wonderful! So this is a new contest, huh? I just can't keep up here any more. Good luck in the contest,Alexis.

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/18/2021 9:10:00 AM

Wow, Alexis, you penned such a wonderfully sentimental and romantic poem with great expression and incredible symbolism...Although I wouldn't expect that sad end of being alone in a one place bed. Best wishes for a contest placement. Blessings and hugs

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/18/2021 8:40:00 AM

That was a surprise ending. Loved your poem Best for a win.