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You Live in a Fantasy World Contest

Whilst I rest, you visit me, always mindful when I'm so tired. Please do not feel duty-bound, honey, though bond is surely hard-wired. Your touch restores my strength, my friend, when I am all lost in my head. Know I'll fly again through faith you send, thank you for wise words you said.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/13/2024 5:50:00 AM

Ahhh!!! Nice fairy tale that is on the winners' list. Way to go. Congratulations on your win. Sara K

Di11y Da11y
Date: 12/15/2024 11:18:00 AM

Thank you Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/13/2024 4:25:00 AM

- A lovely poem for Eve's painting :) - Congratulations on your win, D.D. :) - Merry Christmas :) - hugs

Di11y Da11y
Date: 12/13/2024 4:28:00 AM

Aww you're so sweet Anne-Lise, thank you! Every time you comment I remember that I want to travel to Norway :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/12/2024 8:52:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. A different take on the picture. We all need rest. We all need a visit from a friend. What a great ending... Hope you are OK... Have a wonderful day writing away..............

Di11y Da11y
Date: 12/12/2024 1:30:00 PM

Thank you Paula x

Speaks Volumes

Date: 12/10/2024 11:37:00 PM

Even betwixt a fairy and a dragonfly with a contrite heart, there can be devotion that resurrects all frailties. This isn't sad but it makes me jealous. A lovely piece dear friend.

Speaks Volumes
Date: 12/11/2024 12:06:00 AM

ahuhhh :)

Di11y Da11y
Date: 12/10/2024 11:43:00 PM

Lovely to see you Wen! A place to feel safe and supported and let any troubles float away for a while is an enviable place. Even if that is sat on a sunflower, talking to a dragonfly x

Ink Empress

Date: 12/10/2024 5:39:00 AM

Oh, you really put yourself in the wings of the fairy! And youv delivered on that is so heartfelt, and now as i look at the artwork i see a fairy waiting for light and hope and one to restore their faith to fly again, the way you interpret art is beyond impressive! The dragonfly now her friend giving her a reason to hope and flicker some pixie dust! I really love how youv interpreted it! Best wishes for the contest! Pleasure always reading your poems dear DD, sending you light always

Di11y Da11y
Date: 12/10/2024 5:52:00 AM

You're too kind haha thank you for taking the time to read my entry. Appreciated

Paul Bell

Date: 12/10/2024 2:29:00 AM

Aw, Dilly, this is a sad one. Thoughts flying through the air, restoring faith. I pass a church on my run later. I'll stop and touch the wall. It will either send you hope or strike me down.

Paul Bell
Date: 12/11/2024 8:14:00 AM

I would love to be a milkman. In saying that, they do start early.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 12/10/2024 2:52:00 AM

Paul, the poem is about a dragonfly and a fairy but I'm moved by your empathy. Truly risking life and limb there - when the truth really comes out I bet you'll be lined up for a sainthood haha just wondering is that an exercise run or a milkmans run? Bet you could get a poem out of it if the latter lol thank you for your kindness :)

Di11y Da11y
Date: 12/10/2024 2:35:00 AM