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You live in a fantasy

What a pretty day,
sitting watching bees play.
My yellow sunflower bends.
I am perched up high,
friends will go by.
Dragon fly and a fairy are friends.

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Daisy Meadows

January 19, 2025 at 12:52 AM

Beautiful! A lovely poem!!

Paula Goldsmith

January 19, 2025 at 8:04 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you found my "Fantasy" write to be a Beautiful! A lovely poem. That makes me happy. Watch out for the dragon flies and fairies as you write away.....................

Crystol Woods

December 13, 2024 at 10:59 AM

How sweet! Lovely Paula! Xo

Paula Goldsmith

January 19, 2025 at 8:01 AM

So sorry I missed this from you. December/Christmas were very busy here. People from out of town. Husband in hospital. Thanks for reading/writing and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my "Fantasy" write. This was a ton of fun to write. Have a wonderful week. Watch out for the dragon flies and fairies as you write away.....................

Sara Kendrick

December 13, 2024 at 5:11 AM

Ahhh!!! Nice fairy tale that is on the winners' list. Way to go. Back with congratulations on your win. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith

January 19, 2025 at 8:00 AM

So sorry I missed this from you. December/Christmas were very busy here. People from out of town. Husband in hospital. Thanks for reading/writing and for your Congratulations. Glad you found my "Fantasy" write to be a Nice fairy tale that is on the winners' list. It was fun to write. Watch out for the dragon flies and fairies as you write away.....................

Anne-Lise Andresen

December 13, 2024 at 4:18 AM

- Congratulations on your win, Paula :) - Merry Christmas :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith

January 19, 2025 at 7:56 AM

So sorry I missed this from you. December/Christmas were very busy here. People from out of town. Husband in hospital. Thanks for reading/writing and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my "Fantasy" write. Have a wonderful week. Hugs... Watch out for the dragon flies and fairies as you write away.....................

Paula Goldsmith

December 12, 2024 at 7:40 AM

"1 Place" You live in a fantasy world~Date Written:11/25/2024~Written By Human Poet......

Beryl Edmonds

December 12, 2024 at 7:01 PM

Back to say - Congratulations Paula on your 1st place win with this lovely fantasy world write… Beryl

Valsa George

December 11, 2024 at 10:06 PM

Congratulations dear Paula on your first place win. Have a great weekend. Love and hugs.

Paula Goldsmith

December 12, 2024 at 7:43 AM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my "Fantasy" write. This was a ton of fun to write. Have a wonderful weekend. Watch out for the dragon flies and fairies as you write away.....................

Sara Kendrick

December 8, 2024 at 9:37 AM

It reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Being a small Fairy like that I would think that giant sunflower looked like the empire state building. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith

December 10, 2024 at 7:48 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my "Fantasy" write. I guess the size is the fun part about NR. It is a cute picture to write about. Watch out for the dragon flies and fairies as you write away.....................

David Fisher

December 4, 2024 at 4:06 PM

That's so nicely put, Paula. I could see your poem with the picture in a museum.

Paula Goldsmith

December 5, 2024 at 7:35 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you found my "Fantasy" write to be so nicely put. WOW!!! In a museum??? Thanks for your kind words. You made my day. Watch out for the dragon flies and fairies as you write away.....................

Jennifer Proxenos

December 4, 2024 at 9:59 AM

Hi Paula, cute write, fairies are my favorite fantasy so enjoyed this poem so very much. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Paula Goldsmith

December 4, 2024 at 12:54 PM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you found my "Fantasy" write to be a cute write. It was so much fun to write. Hugs... Watch out for the dragon flies and fairies as you write away.....................

Beryl Edmonds

December 3, 2024 at 11:31 AM

A lovely fantasy poem Paula, it goes with the picture well.. Enjoy the rest of the day… Beryl

Paula Goldsmith

December 3, 2024 at 1:11 PM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you found my "Fantasy" write to be A lovely fantasy poem. It was so much fun to bring to life. Enjoy your evening... Watch out for the dragon flies and fairies as you write away.....................

Andrea Dietrich

November 29, 2024 at 12:03 AM

So cute. I see you chose the shorter way!

Paula Goldsmith

December 3, 2024 at 8:21 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you found my "Fantasy" write to be So cute. This what came to me... Watch out for the dragon flies and fairies as you write away.....................

Gershon Wolf

November 27, 2024 at 7:14 PM

Why not?! Might as well! ~ Draggin On

Paula Goldsmith

December 3, 2024 at 8:18 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my "Fantasy" write. I had a fun time writing this one. Watch out for the dragon flies and fairies as you write away.....................

Evelyn Judy Buehler

November 26, 2024 at 2:13 PM

And what a delightful fantasy it is! Love it! :)

Paula Goldsmith

November 27, 2024 at 8:49 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you Love my "Fantasy" write. I enjoyed bringing this one to life..... Watch out for the dragon flies and fairies as you write away.....................

Malabika Ray Choudhury

November 26, 2024 at 10:48 AM

Magical poem, Dear Paula! I love fantasy poems!

Paula Goldsmith

November 27, 2024 at 8:48 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you found my "Fantasy" write to be a Magical poem. Yes, fantasy poems are so much fun to read. It was a ton of fun to write. Watch out for the dragon flies and fairies as you write away.....................

Victor Buhagiar

November 26, 2024 at 8:46 AM

What a cute poem. I love fantasy.

Paula Goldsmith

November 26, 2024 at 10:40 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you found my "Fantasy" write to be a cute poem. It was so much fun to write. Watch out for the dragon flies and fairies as you write away.....................

Anne E Sangster - K

November 26, 2024 at 7:36 AM

A lovely sweet poem Paula. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Anne :-)

Paula Goldsmith

November 26, 2024 at 7:51 AM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your Good luck in the contest. Glad you found my "Fantasy" write to be A lovely sweet poem. It was fun to bring to life. Hugs... Watch out for the dragon flies and fairies as you write away.....................

Silent One

November 25, 2024 at 11:19 AM

A lovely interpretation of the painting my friend..

Paula Goldsmith

November 26, 2024 at 7:49 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you found my "Fantasy" write to be A lovely interpretation of the painting. It was a fun painting to write on. Watch out for the dragon flies and fairies as you write away.....................

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 25, 2024 at 11:18 AM

- A lovely poem, Paula :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith

November 26, 2024 at 7:47 AM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your Good luck in the contest. Glad you found my "Fantasy" write to be A lovely poem. I enjoyed writing this one. Hugs... Watch out for the dragon flies and fairies as you write away.....................

Joseph May

November 25, 2024 at 10:48 AM

Very nicely penned Paula, best wishes

Paula Goldsmith

November 26, 2024 at 7:45 AM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your best wishes. Glad you found my "Fantasy" write to be Very nicely penned. Watch out for the dragon flies and fairies as you write away.....................

Jay Narain

November 25, 2024 at 9:50 AM

Must be a fantasy on a cold cloudy dreary day. Nice muse.

Paula Goldsmith

November 26, 2024 at 7:44 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my "Fantasy" write. It was fun to write. Watch out for the dragon flies and fairies as you write away.....................

Joseph P. DiMino

November 25, 2024 at 9:33 AM

Very pretty; fantasy...perhaps such darling wee inhabitants, part of another alluring dimension no further than heartfelt thought away.

Paula Goldsmith

November 26, 2024 at 7:41 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you found my "Fantasy" write to be a Very pretty; fantasy. Watch out for the dragon flies and fairies as you write away.....................

Yann Rolland

November 25, 2024 at 8:22 AM

just so marvelous poem, enjoyed yann

Paula Goldsmith

November 26, 2024 at 7:39 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed and found my "Fantasy" write to be so marvelous. Watch out for the dragon flies and fairies as you write away.....................

Paula Goldsmith

November 25, 2024 at 8:14 AM

You live in a fantasy world~Date Written: 11/25/2024~Written By Human Poet......

You live in a fantasy

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