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You had a crush on her

You had a crush on her You had a crush on her Being sure as well Love is what you felt, Dating her exclusively Without ever telling her. She indulged in your care Like you were her kid-brother, And you rejoiced finding passion In proximity of her splendor, Feeling mighty blessed When she wrapped you in a hug. You didn’t know how to ask What kind of love that was, Had no clue how to talk about The flutter in your heart, And now you're too grown-up to ask Yet, you are dying to find out If she ever connected the dots. January 6, 2018

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Date: 1/15/2019 10:28:00 AM
Hi Vijay, I can surely relate to this my friend. It is so easy to see the scene through your wonderful works. Many are the crushes I have had, from high school on. I gave up having crushes about four to five years ago. Love sings onto the page. You have expressed the feelings so well my friend. Have a wonderful Tuesday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 7/17/2018 3:34:00 PM
Oh, yes! Have we not all of us felt these rushes of passion for a person who may never have known the depth of our true love and devotion. Thank you, Man!
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Date: 1/8/2018 5:20:00 PM
Oh, the ache of a young crush is so well depicted in your superlative poem, Vijay. Wondrously expressed to enjoy and to bring back memories... Awesome! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/9/2018 11:17:00 AM
Thank you Susan..enjoyed reading your lovely comments.
Date: 1/8/2018 6:06:00 AM
Young Love, yes have we not experienced it at some time or other? Vijay you have depicted this so well, a magnificent write, and a fave for me...Maria
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Date: 1/8/2018 7:22:00 AM
Thank you maria..enjoyed reading your comments.
Date: 1/7/2018 12:45:00 PM
- When the courage fails - Lovely written, Vijay - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/7/2018 4:38:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise.
Date: 1/7/2018 11:42:00 AM
This is a sad but great poem Vijay. I am sure many can relate to this and you told this so perfectly that many thought back to their first crush and wished they had that courage that is lacking in this poem. A magnificent write.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/7/2018 12:17:00 PM
Enjoyed your comments James..thank you.
Date: 1/7/2018 10:41:00 AM
Hmmm, if she is not showing him the same affection back, she must not want to connect the dots! I like this, Vijay. I had a few crushes in my youth and they sure do make a person heartsick!!
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Date: 1/7/2018 12:16:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your comments--thank you Andrea.
Date: 1/7/2018 10:38:00 AM
You have described this very well Vijay . Beautiful and sad . Well done :)
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Date: 1/7/2018 12:15:00 PM
Thank you Heidi.
Date: 1/7/2018 8:21:00 AM
How many potential love stories have been squelched by a lack of courage? This is so well expressed. Sweet and sad rolled into one.
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Date: 1/7/2018 8:47:00 AM
Thank you Richard..appreciate your comments.
Date: 1/6/2018 7:04:00 PM
This poem shows that men have just as profound of feelings as women do, if not more! I loved this Vijay! Beautiful! : )
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Date: 1/7/2018 6:26:00 AM
Thank you Connie--enjoyed reading your comments.
Date: 1/6/2018 7:01:00 PM
A lovely write about young, innocent love Vijay! Nicely penned :) ~Judy
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Date: 1/7/2018 6:24:00 AM
Innocent is the word--so true, Judy..thanks for your comments.
Date: 1/6/2018 6:51:00 PM
Vijay...Wow...That's sooo good! Going into the ol' Fave file!
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Date: 1/7/2018 6:24:00 AM
Thank you Chuck..enjoyed reading your comments.
Date: 1/6/2018 1:26:00 PM
Unrequited, unasked therefore unanswered...so sad. Beautiful write, Vijay
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Date: 1/6/2018 4:19:00 PM
Thank you Rhoda..enjoyed reading your comments.
Date: 1/6/2018 1:21:00 PM
I used to have a crush on our Priest, mind you I was only 7years old, and he was the handsomest man I ever seen, until I was eight and met for the first time a white man with the bluest eyes and blond hair. I told our priest I can't marry him anymore because I will be marrying an American white man with blue eyes. He said he was heartbroken but he must let me follow my dream. Lol! Hope this made you smile :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/6/2018 4:19:00 PM
It sure made me smile. A cute love story---two love stories in fact! Thank you friend for your comments.
Date: 1/6/2018 12:37:00 PM
You brought back many heartbreaks with this one Vijay, well done anyway...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/6/2018 4:17:00 PM
Sorry Charlie...appreciate your comments..many thanks, friend.
Date: 1/6/2018 11:58:00 AM
Love mesmerizes the heart and make it a servant of the beloved! Great perspective my friend, Vijay!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/6/2018 4:16:00 PM
Thank you my friend..enjoyed reading your comments.
Date: 1/6/2018 10:31:00 AM
I think most of us at one time, have experienced this and will wonder for years to come. Beautiful and artfully expressed Vijay.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/6/2018 4:16:00 PM
So true Elaine..thanks for the visit and your lovely comments.
Date: 1/6/2018 9:52:00 AM
I think girls realise better than boys when it comes to crushes.. I think back and recall all those that I never realised... So many that got away.. Great write Vijay..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/6/2018 4:15:00 PM
Thank you Silent One..you are right about the female instincts.
Date: 1/6/2018 7:17:00 AM
Wow... that is young love, a never dying love...you captured it in your poem...Lovely Vijay...A great one...Blessings to you my friend
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/6/2018 4:13:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your comments..many thanks Arturo.