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You Excite All My Senses

For Timothy Lee You excite all my senses. I happily lack any defenses against stimuli your love dispenses. Your ways lack false pretenses. Whenever together, true joy commences. Eyes, ears, taste, scents, touch - all intoxicate me so much. My heart and soul clutch because our love grants such. You are my sweet penuche. Thoughts of me and you paint a picture perfect view. Our combination is love's brew sweet seeped through and through. Daily, love gifts us anew.

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Valsa George

Date: 5/12/2025 12:43:00 AM

I see you are already a winner. Congratulations!

CayCay Jennings
Date: 5/12/2025 1:14:00 AM

It was the 5x5x3 contest (I think I got that right.) Thank you for visiting me, I enjoy your presence and your talent. I have drawn a complete blank for Constance's 16 line contest, have had no inspiration kick in. I'm still inviting ideas to blossom. Be golden, Valsa ... CayCay

Valsa George

Date: 5/12/2025 12:42:00 AM

Such a beautifully rhyming poem. Great flow too. It would be an amazing combination of love that can definitely titillate anyone's senses. I feel this is for Constance's Contest. All the Best dear Cay Cay

Miranda Hawley

Date: 5/2/2025 9:05:00 PM

This is a nice little romantic poem. Congrats on your win in my contest. Yes, I've been slow to judge and comment, but I have not forgotten.

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 5/1/2025 7:17:00 AM

So good to see you again CayCay, this is a lovely crafted piece with nice rhyme and flow too. Blessings always,Gordon

Paul Callus

Date: 4/30/2025 1:48:00 PM

I 'm glad I clicked on this poem of yours CayCay! It's been a while since our paths crossed! You ably appeal to all the senses with delightful rhymes. Congratulations on your fine win! ~ Regards // paul

Terry Miller

Date: 4/29/2025 7:35:00 AM

Very sweet, congratulations

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/28/2025 2:13:00 AM

This is so lyrical. Your love has no boundaries. Excellent poem.

Krishnanand Guptar

Date: 4/27/2025 11:27:00 PM

Congratulations, dear poetess, on your top win in this poetry contest with a lovely lyrical poem with enticing rhymes as sweet as the "penuche". Blessings of light as always.

David Crandall

Date: 4/27/2025 9:36:00 AM

Sweet poem - penuche is the topper!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 4/27/2025 8:41:00 AM

Congratulations Caycay! Congratulations! :)

Trina Layne

Date: 4/26/2025 9:08:00 PM

Congrats on your piece! Blessings ~ TL

Paige Hind

Date: 4/21/2025 9:00:00 PM

Beautiful, and so romantic, magic

Tania Kitchin

Date: 4/19/2025 8:05:00 AM

CayCay, a sweet poem and so well done with wonderful rhymes.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/18/2025 12:09:00 PM

So sweet, so angelically beautiful, so sincere, and so meaningful. Magic intense poetry dear Cay Cay. 'You excite all my senses' .....but the line I Like so much is 'Your ways lack false pretenses'. HUGS, BLESSINGS. Jennifer.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/18/2025 1:57:00 AM

This poem taste like honey. So well done.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/16/2025 8:27:00 PM

Sweet as sugar, CayCay!

Ink Empress

Date: 4/16/2025 9:18:00 AM

Awwn how sweet! This is such a soul warming lyrical poem so well written and delivered dear cay cay! I love the rhymes, so sublime too! And i love the line “ You are my sweet penuche.” that sounds so cute!!!! Pleasure reading your poem today! Sending you light always. Best wishes