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You Excite All My Senses

For Timothy Lee

You excite all my senses.
I happily lack any defenses
against stimuli your love dispenses.
Your ways lack false pretenses.
Whenever together, true joy commences.

Eyes, ears, taste, scents, touch -
all intoxicate me so much.
My heart and soul clutch
because our love grants such.
You are my sweet penuche.

Thoughts of me and you
paint a picture perfect view.
Our combination is love's brew
sweet seeped through and through.
Daily, love gifts us anew.

Copyright © CayCay Jennings | Year Posted 2025

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Ron VanHooser Date: 8/1/2025 11:44:00 AM Wonderful CayCay! This poem reminds me of several of my own. Excellent rhyme and meter, very well done. Login to Reply

Valsa George Date: 5/12/2025 12:43:00 AM I see you are already a winner. Congratulations! Login to Reply CayCay Jennings Date: 5/12/2025 1:14:00 AM It was the 5x5x3 contest (I think I got that right.) Thank you for visiting me, I enjoy your presence and your talent. I have drawn a complete blank for Constance's 16 line contest, have had no inspiration kick in. I'm still inviting ideas to blossom. Be golden, Valsa ... CayCay

Valsa George Date: 5/12/2025 12:42:00 AM Such a beautifully rhyming poem. Great flow too. It would be an amazing combination of love that can definitely titillate anyone's senses. I feel this is for Constance's Contest. All the Best dear Cay Cay Login to Reply

Miranda Hawley Date: 5/2/2025 9:05:00 PM This is a nice little romantic poem. Congrats on your win in my contest. Yes, I've been slow to judge and comment, but I have not forgotten. Login to Reply

Gordon Mcconnell Date: 5/1/2025 7:17:00 AM So good to see you again CayCay, this is a lovely crafted piece with nice rhyme and flow too. Blessings always,Gordon Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 4/30/2025 1:48:00 PM I 'm glad I clicked on this poem of yours CayCay! It's been a while since our paths crossed! You ably appeal to all the senses with delightful rhymes. Congratulations on your fine win! ~ Regards // paul Login to Reply

Terry Miller Date: 4/29/2025 7:35:00 AM Very sweet, congratulations Login to Reply

Victor Buhagiar Date: 4/28/2025 2:13:00 AM This is so lyrical. Your love has no boundaries. Excellent poem. Login to Reply

Krishnanand Guptar Date: 4/27/2025 11:27:00 PM Congratulations, dear poetess, on your top win in this poetry contest with a lovely lyrical poem with enticing rhymes as sweet as the "penuche". Blessings of light as always. Login to Reply

David Crandall Date: 4/27/2025 9:36:00 AM Sweet poem - penuche is the topper! Login to Reply

Linda Alice Fowler Date: 4/27/2025 8:41:00 AM Congratulations Caycay! Congratulations! :) Login to Reply

Trina Layne Date: 4/26/2025 9:08:00 PM Congrats on your piece! Blessings ~ TL Login to Reply

Paige Hind Date: 4/21/2025 9:00:00 PM Beautiful, and so romantic, magic Login to Reply

Tania Kitchin Date: 4/19/2025 8:05:00 AM CayCay, a sweet poem and so well done with wonderful rhymes. Login to Reply

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 4/18/2025 12:09:00 PM So sweet, so angelically beautiful, so sincere, and so meaningful. Magic intense poetry dear Cay Cay. 'You excite all my senses' .....but the line I Like so much is 'Your ways lack false pretenses'. HUGS, BLESSINGS. Jennifer. Login to Reply

Victor Buhagiar Date: 4/18/2025 1:57:00 AM This poem taste like honey. So well done. Login to Reply

Gershon Wolf Date: 4/16/2025 8:27:00 PM Sweet as sugar, CayCay! Login to Reply

Ink Empress Date: 4/16/2025 9:18:00 AM Awwn how sweet! This is such a soul warming lyrical poem so well written and delivered dear cay cay! I love the rhymes, so sublime too! And i love the line “ You are my sweet penuche.” that sounds so cute!!!! Pleasure reading your poem today! Sending you light always. Best wishes Login to Reply