CayCay Godwin Poet Rhyme

You Excite All My Senses

For Timothy Lee

You excite all my senses.
I happily lack any defenses
against stimuli your love dispenses.
Your ways lack false pretenses.
Whenever together, true joy commences.

Eyes, ears, taste, scents, touch -
all intoxicate me so much.
My heart and soul clutch
because our love grants such.
You are my sweet penuche.

Thoughts of me and you
paint a picture perfect view.
Our combination is love's brew
sweet seeped through and through.
Daily, love gifts us anew.

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Ron VanHooser August 1, 2025 at 11:44 AM Wonderful CayCay! This poem reminds me of several of my own. Excellent rhyme and meter, very well done.

Valsa George May 12, 2025 at 12:43 AM I see you are already a winner. Congratulations! CayCay Godwin May 12, 2025 at 1:14 AM It was the 5x5x3 contest (I think I got that right.) Thank you for visiting me, I enjoy your presence and your talent. I have drawn a complete blank for Constance's 16 line contest, have had no inspiration kick in. I'm still inviting ideas to blossom. Be golden, Valsa ... CayCay

Valsa George May 12, 2025 at 12:42 AM Such a beautifully rhyming poem. Great flow too. It would be an amazing combination of love that can definitely titillate anyone's senses. I feel this is for Constance's Contest. All the Best dear Cay Cay

Miranda Hawley May 2, 2025 at 9:05 PM This is a nice little romantic poem. Congrats on your win in my contest. Yes, I've been slow to judge and comment, but I have not forgotten.

Gordon Mcconnell May 1, 2025 at 7:17 AM So good to see you again CayCay, this is a lovely crafted piece with nice rhyme and flow too. Blessings always,Gordon

Paul Callus April 30, 2025 at 1:48 PM I 'm glad I clicked on this poem of yours CayCay! It's been a while since our paths crossed! You ably appeal to all the senses with delightful rhymes. Congratulations on your fine win! ~ Regards // paul

Terry Miller April 29, 2025 at 7:35 AM Very sweet, congratulations

Victor Buhagiar April 28, 2025 at 2:13 AM This is so lyrical. Your love has no boundaries. Excellent poem.

Krishnanand Guptar April 27, 2025 at 11:27 PM Congratulations, dear poetess, on your top win in this poetry contest with a lovely lyrical poem with enticing rhymes as sweet as the "penuche". Blessings of light as always.

David Crandall April 27, 2025 at 9:36 AM Sweet poem - penuche is the topper!

Linda Alice Fowler April 27, 2025 at 8:41 AM Congratulations Caycay! Congratulations! :)

Trina Layne April 26, 2025 at 9:08 PM Congrats on your piece! Blessings ~ TL

Paige Hind April 21, 2025 at 9:00 PM Beautiful, and so romantic, magic

Tania Kitchin April 19, 2025 at 8:05 AM CayCay, a sweet poem and so well done with wonderful rhymes.

Jennifer Proxenos April 18, 2025 at 12:09 PM So sweet, so angelically beautiful, so sincere, and so meaningful. Magic intense poetry dear Cay Cay. 'You excite all my senses' .....but the line I Like so much is 'Your ways lack false pretenses'. HUGS, BLESSINGS. Jennifer.

Victor Buhagiar April 18, 2025 at 1:57 AM This poem taste like honey. So well done.

Gershon Wolf April 16, 2025 at 8:27 PM Sweet as sugar, CayCay!

Ink Empress April 16, 2025 at 9:18 AM Awwn how sweet! This is such a soul warming lyrical poem so well written and delivered dear cay cay! I love the rhymes, so sublime too! And i love the line “ You are my sweet penuche.” that sounds so cute!!!! Pleasure reading your poem today! Sending you light always. Best wishes