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Bite size No 71 Contest sponsored by Line Gauthier

September 12, 2023

On your kisses I feast as a bee on nectar You are the beacon that brightens my world A shimmering star enhancing the moonlight It doesn't matter what words you whisper All of them sound like je t'aime to my ears

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Karen Jones

Date: 9/23/2023 2:45:00 PM

love this and congrats

Lin Lane
Date: 9/23/2023 2:48:00 PM

Thanks a bunch, Karen.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/15/2023 2:43:00 AM

what a gorgeous romantic poem Lin! many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 9/15/2023 3:09:00 AM

Thanks for the congrats and the hugs!

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 9/14/2023 8:01:00 PM

je t'aime ~ new word for me. Beautiful love poem, Lin, warmest congratulations on your win

Lin Lane
Date: 9/15/2023 3:09:00 AM

Thanks very much, Seeker. Je t’aime sounds so beautiful when whispered.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/14/2023 8:30:00 AM

So romantic. Oui! Oui! Congratulations!

Lin Lane
Date: 9/15/2023 3:07:00 AM

Merci beau coup, Kim.

Jay Narain

Date: 9/12/2023 10:25:00 AM

Very romantic poem with a French ending,

Lin Lane
Date: 9/12/2023 3:00:00 PM

Hi Jay and thanks for leaving your comments.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/12/2023 9:49:00 AM

Oozing sweetness - very romantic Lin! :)

Lin Lane
Date: 9/12/2023 2:59:00 PM

Thanks so much for your kind remarks, Linda.

John Lawless

Date: 9/12/2023 6:52:00 AM

my french is a little rusty....does that mean "I brought the croissants"...hehehe I had to go there....very sensuous write Lin, a kiss to make the universe tremble...

Lin Lane
Date: 9/12/2023 8:35:00 AM

Lol it means “if you don’t share those croissants, I’ll make you tremble but it won’t be from a kiss!” Thanks for your humor, John.

Susan Lawrence

Date: 9/12/2023 5:47:00 AM

So sweet … I love this Lin! Yes just whisper in my ears ! Don’t stop ! Hugs to you , Susan :)

Lin Lane
Date: 9/12/2023 8:33:00 AM

Thanks Susan. Slow sweet kisses are the best.