Lin Lane Poet Free verse

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Bite size No 71 Contest sponsored by Line Gauthier

September 12, 2023

You Enhance the Moonlight

On your kisses I feast as a bee on nectar
You are the beacon that brightens my world
A shimmering star enhancing the moonlight
It doesn't matter what words you whisper
All of them sound like je t'aime to my ears

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Karen Jones September 23, 2023 at 2:45 PM love this and congrats Lin Lane September 23, 2023 at 2:48 PM Thanks a bunch, Karen.

Jan Allison September 15, 2023 at 2:43 AM what a gorgeous romantic poem Lin! many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx Lin Lane September 15, 2023 at 3:09 AM Thanks for the congrats and the hugs!

Unseeking Seeker September 14, 2023 at 8:01 PM je t'aime ~ new word for me. Beautiful love poem, Lin, warmest congratulations on your win Lin Lane September 15, 2023 at 3:09 AM Thanks very much, Seeker. Je t’aime sounds so beautiful when whispered.

Kim Rodrigues September 14, 2023 at 8:30 AM So romantic. Oui! Oui! Congratulations! Lin Lane September 15, 2023 at 3:07 AM Merci beau coup, Kim.

Jay Narain September 12, 2023 at 10:25 AM Very romantic poem with a French ending, Lin Lane September 12, 2023 at 3:00 PM Hi Jay and thanks for leaving your comments.

Linda Alice Fowler September 12, 2023 at 9:49 AM Oozing sweetness - very romantic Lin! :) Lin Lane September 12, 2023 at 2:59 PM Thanks so much for your kind remarks, Linda.

John Lawless September 12, 2023 at 6:52 AM my french is a little rusty....does that mean "I brought the croissants"...hehehe I had to go there....very sensuous write Lin, a kiss to make the universe tremble... Lin Lane September 12, 2023 at 8:35 AM Lol it means “if you don’t share those croissants, I’ll make you tremble but it won’t be from a kiss!” Thanks for your humor, John.

Susan Lawrence September 12, 2023 at 5:47 AM So sweet … I love this Lin! Yes just whisper in my ears ! Don’t stop ! Hugs to you , Susan :) Lin Lane September 12, 2023 at 8:33 AM Thanks Susan. Slow sweet kisses are the best.