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You Didn'T Come

My eyes are glued to the door A glimpse of you I haven’t got The day will witness a downpour That blue sky of my eyes start Today also the pouring rain Will not quench the thirst Of my burning soul in chain That couldn’t contain adjust Today also the fairy of sleep Wouldn't enter window of my eyes Blade of emptiness cuts me deep Today also in wilderness go my cries Today also the flowers of wounds Blow in the desert of my heart Where thorn of anguish abounds The horror of solitude plays its part Today also peace has no trace And apathy leaves me aghast All I’ve is misfortune’s embrace Will this continue until I last? Tonight also am I destined to die? With pangs of hurt, agony and pain My resurrection in morn death defy Will my heart its torments maintain?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 4/6/2012 2:55:00 PM
You seem so sad in many of your poems Mohammad, they always touch me and make me hope life is treating you well. I too write on the dark side a lot but am not really a dark personality. This one has so much angst that you express really well.
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Date: 11/27/2009 6:06:00 PM
this was a beautiful peom you write all your peom's very well. keep up the good work there beautiful. love reading them.
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Date: 4/24/2009 2:47:00 AM
wow. Mohammed.I liked it..very heartfelt.Thanks for your comments.Well I dont know urdu, but in India we all (Hindus, Muslims,Parsis, Christians) live together and so we kind of know little bit of all languages.Anyways the same verse in Hindi is "Karma kar phal ki chinta mat kar"..like I said all religions teach the same thing .All the best--Rima
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Date: 1/1/2009 8:12:00 PM
this was a pretty peom . kinda heartfelt.
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Date: 8/13/2008 6:54:00 PM
A deep writer you are in touch with yourself and expressing your minds pictures, great write! Laura :)
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Date: 8/12/2008 2:04:00 PM
I don't know how you do it! I read and re-read your words, your emotions so well captured. I believe that we all suffer with you as we read your work.
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Date: 8/12/2008 5:30:00 AM
My goodness I hope you are not truly suffering so. Love the line "Blades of emptiness cut me deep". This is so powerful in it's pain. We all have our moments in time. hope yours passes quickly. Wishing you brighter days. Love, Shar
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Date: 8/12/2008 1:14:00 AM
Mohammad - What a beautifully written poem - a true pleasure to read - God Bless
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Date: 8/11/2008 8:33:00 PM
Keep writing with your feelings but go deeper. I liked this poem
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