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You-Crumbs

Fragments of a buried life, microscopic pieces, gathering and breeding, in all the little creases. Snapshots, stills and scrapbooks, documented angst, diaries of disasters,of when I craved another chance. Handled like a teeny fragile delicate new-born, hands grasped too hard now it lies broken and torn. It's always this way, destroy all that I touch, so I keep you in jars, the temptation too much. I seal up my thoughts and I write them all down, untouched so I stand back to see how they've grown. Some fragments have splintered some hairy from dust, for those I wept tears on have crumbled from rust. But those I hold precious, the last you-crumbs I've got, I've locked up, protected, concealed from the rot.

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Date: 2/16/2018 1:57:00 PM
Hello Jodie, i also like this poem. I like the very lst line. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 2/5/2018 1:45:00 PM
This is an amazing write, so unique in it's concept and execution, I think you are a rising star on the soup, just watch what happens, mark my words Jodie, I think you are one to watch!!!
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Jodie Williams
Date: 2/8/2018 11:00:00 AM
Thank you John, your comments are very encouraging, I appreciate you taking the time not only to read my writes but to personally correspond too. Thank you.

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