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You Changed Me

You made me something I never thought I would see You made me something I never thought I'd be able to be You took my heart and formed it in your own way You crawled into my heart and blew my breath away. I love you more with each passing day I love you in a way that words would never be able to say The world tried to break me because of you They even tried taking you away from me too But our love was stronger than what the world had Our love survived it and that's what made my heart so glad I never thought my heart could ever be glad. With one kiss my whole world turned With one touch all the angry feelings inside me burned With one stare into your beautiful eyes I knew that the feelings in me was world's away from lies You changed the feelings I live with today It's feelings I never want to go away This poem could never explain how much I love you That's because the alphabet ain't strong enough for the love I have for you I live for the feelings that I have in my heart And know that our love will never decide to part.

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Skat A

Date: 1/19/2016 7:05:00 PM

Jacques Oosthuyzen,, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/16/2014 5:49:00 PM

Jacques, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 9/14/2014 7:28:00 PM

Hi Jacques, what a deep powerful write this is! Bravo! A warm welcome to PoetrySoup and happy writings! Pandita

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/14/2014 8:11:00 AM

Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Jacques - I choose your first lovely written poem in rhyme - You write skillfully - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)