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You Can'T Take It With You !

We all brought nothing into this world, Just our souls in tact All of us had chosen are separate ways, Get caught off guard in some purple haze, Each gravitational pull had sought to bring each of us down, Like a storm trouper that was lost in the sand You can't take it with you when you die ! A soft yet solemn solace of a reply, To hush a song of a nice little tune of a sweet song, It won't be long till we can all sing a happy tune, Whether it's in May or even late in June, Did your mother just tell you to go clean your room ? Still these are desolate time yet our nation as a whole has created ill but faded rhymes, For casualties that are all too atrocious ? We can buy and even sell yet you can't take it with you when you die, May I leave you with one last soft reply, You can't take it with you cause God must have the final say !

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/1/2010 12:00:00 PM
It was my pleasure to read your excellent writing today Mario. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/31/2010 5:32:00 PM
good one! Enjoyed reading today... witty!!
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Date: 10/31/2010 4:10:00 PM
Soup Mail!!!!
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Date: 10/31/2010 11:52:00 AM
That is indeed the theory, but then we don't know if the memories carry on without the flesh... Excellent though, as advice :) Sheri
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