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You Can't Take It, Nor Anything Else, With You

You can’t take it with you After you’re gone You can’t take it, nor Can you take a song You can’t take a maybe Nor a bowl of gravy But it doesn’t just mean That you can’t take the green What I can’t take Is taking that saying But I’ll leave the hens And eggs they’re laying You can’t take the past The day after your last Nor one of the days When you’re taken away. You can’t take old dreams Even with pretty please But it’s good you can’t take Cumquats nor peas You can’t take a number Nor two-by-four lumber You can’t take your time When you’re out of time You can’t take ideas That were in your head Because that and it Are of no use for the dead But you can make amends Before your life ends And take your best shot Giving life all you got

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Date: 2/29/2024 8:44:00 AM
What a fun yet powerful write. Many live like they are going to take it with them. I will not miss a thing. Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away..................
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Date: 2/25/2024 7:51:00 PM
Very true. Good thoughts to live by.
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Date: 2/24/2024 7:05:00 PM
Your last four lines remind us what life is all about, tied up with a shiny bow.!! I am not going to say how! Each one of us is at some level of enlightenment so that would be silly. I enjoyed the cleverness of your previous lines, as usual. )) you always make me laugh! I wonder… why didn’t I think of that? Answer…….because you can think outside the box! It is your expertise!! Great write, Panagiota
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 2/25/2024 4:02:00 PM
Wish I could write some funny stuff, David. I dont think I can! Maybe I have. I gave had years of hysterical things happen to me. Zany stuff…i called into a TV channel and told a story,they loved it. I dont do one linersand limericks dont work for me. But plenty of funny stuff., otherwise.)) Pangie. Being clever does not work either,, darn.
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David Fisher
Date: 2/25/2024 3:49:00 PM
Thanks Pangie, I appreciate your thoughts, indeed. Right back at you with making me laugh with some of your fun writes!
Date: 2/24/2024 1:02:00 PM
You've piqued my interest once again. I guess I could buy my coffin ahead of time, but that would mean someday I'm going to die. It's not going to happen.
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David Fisher
Date: 2/25/2024 3:49:00 PM
Lol, luckily others deal with that coffin stuff. Thanks much.
Date: 2/23/2024 11:07:00 PM
Meaningful poetry, David. I especially like your ending, powerful words. Bill
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David Fisher
Date: 2/25/2024 3:50:00 PM
Thanks for your commenting on this, Bill.
Date: 2/23/2024 6:24:00 PM
Dear David, Your poem is a nice reflection on the transient nature of life and the things we hold dear. Through your words, you artfully convey the universal truth that material possessions and earthly treasures ultimately hold no sway over the inevitable passage of time. The repetition of “You can’t take…” serves as a poignant reminder of our inherent limitations and the futility of trying to hold on to that which cannot be retained. Your poem shows a sense of acceptance and wisdom, encouraging us to cherish the fleeting moments and relationships that give life its true richness and meaning. It serves as a gentle nudge to prioritize what truly matters and to embrace each day with gratitude and purpose. Your words have the power to inspire and uplift, reminding us of the beauty and fragility of our shared journey. - Blessings, Daniel
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David Fisher
Date: 2/25/2024 3:52:00 PM
Thanks, Daniel; and I appreciate your ability to look under the hood with a great analysis of a poem.
Date: 2/23/2024 5:28:00 PM
David, this reflects my view of life precisely. Congrats on that (I think). For a while I have been reluctant to express this view. As a joke I say put my ashes next to a TV. A lot of poets write beautiful words about our souls and where they will go. The descriptions are amazing, but I am of the school that this is it for us. Our rather complex brains have allowed us to think we are something special, which in fact is not factual. We are just an evolutionary path (hopefully not a dead end soon).
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Tom Woody
Date: 2/23/2024 5:37:00 PM
Hmmm... A complex computer requires a designer and maker. I wonder who designed the much more complex human brain? And if it was indeed created by a Master Designer, surely he wants more for us than 70 or 80 years, much of it spent in suffering and misery. The answer, my friend, is not blowing in the wind, it's right here - Revelation 4:11; 21:4,5
Date: 2/23/2024 4:47:00 PM
Dang! I was hoping I could take my Debbie Gibson cd with me
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David Fisher
Date: 2/23/2024 5:28:00 PM
Lol, you found the loophole!

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