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You can’t have sun without some rain. You can’t have joy without some pain. You can’t have loss without some gain; That’s just the way things go. You cannot win unless you try. You cannot laugh until you cry. You cannot soar unless you fly; Experience will show. You can’t connect without some doubt. You can’t have growth without some drought. You can’t keep in what must come out, For ebb gives way to flow.

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Date: 3/10/2019 8:32:00 PM
You're even in sync with the Talmud: In order for there to be an Aliyah (elevation), there must first be a yeridah (a descent): -- Maseches Makkos. How about that?! Nicely done, Ilene! ~ Gershon
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Date: 3/10/2019 1:15:00 PM
Well caught, thought, and delivered! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 3/10/2019 8:08:00 AM
A poem that ebbs and flows with a darling cadence, Ilene. Well done. Especially liked "You cannot soar unless you fly."
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Date: 3/9/2019 7:18:00 PM
I like the style and theme of this poem, Ilene! Janice
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Date: 3/9/2019 5:19:00 PM
And a wonderful ebb and flow in this nicely rhythmic poem, as well! Enjoyed this one, Ilene! :)
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