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Triolet

The triolet is an eight-line French form poem with two refrains.
The rhyme scheme is AB aA ab AB. (A and B are repeating refrains.)
A poetic form consisting of only 8 lines.
Within a Triolet, the 1st, 4th, & 7th lines
repeat, and the 2nd and 8th lines do as well.
Each line should be 8 syllables in length

An intertwining triolet.
Combining two or more triolets linked by repeating lines. The sixth line of the first refrain forms the first line of the next refrain and so on.

Where could I find another you, in all the world, you are unique? Sweet angel, what I say is true, where could I find another you? Born this day, you made your debut with your mom's smile and dad's physique. Where could I find another you, in all the world, you are unique? With your mom's smile and dad's physique, there's nothing more precious than you. My heart insists on one more peak, with your mom's smile and dad's physique. Laying kisses upon your cheek, I tiptoe softly out of view. With your mom's smile and dad's physique, there's nothing more precious than you. (Interlocking "Triolet") 1/26/2016

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Date: 5/26/2018 8:38:00 PM
A darling poem, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/27/2018 7:42:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/12/2016 12:18:00 PM
Super sweet and beautiful emile :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/12/2016 3:41:00 PM
Thanks Casarah, I welcome your comments. Emile.
Date: 1/28/2016 9:00:00 AM
Words so gracious. Beauty so outspoken and creativity so explicit. I love this. Thanks for the beyond 7 share.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/28/2016 3:04:00 PM
Thanks Funom, your support is appreciated. Emile.
Date: 1/27/2016 11:07:00 AM
Well done, Emile! You handle this form with ease, and the rhyming words flow effortlessly. The subject is lovely and precious! // paul
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/27/2016 5:19:00 PM
Thanks Paul, your comments and support are most welcome. Emile.
Date: 1/27/2016 10:04:00 AM
Beautiful! Congratulations! The title brought to mind a cartoon I once read. It said "You are unique, just like everybody else." I must say your Grandbaby is adorably cute! What a wonderful way to start the new year.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/27/2016 5:18:00 PM
Thanks so much Richard, what a wonderful way to start a new year indeed, I could not have asked for more! Emile.
Date: 1/26/2016 4:22:00 PM
Very beautiful, Emile. Something she'll treasure forever I'm sure.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/27/2016 8:12:00 AM
Thanks Daniel, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Date: 1/26/2016 3:36:00 PM
absolutely delightful Emile:-) this is very beautiful:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/26/2016 4:06:00 PM
Thanks so much Jan, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Date: 1/26/2016 2:04:00 PM
- Sweet angel, welcome to the world - A beautiful poem, Emile - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/26/2016 4:07:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise, I truly appreciate your comments. Emile.

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