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You Are the Dawning

You are the dawning light of my day as
I wake with your warm body next to mine.
Your deep sexy voice, 
my mesmerizing music.
You are the lilt in my laughter
uplifting my soul to heavenly places.
Your sleepy smile, the antidote 
mending my heart.
You never cease surprising me 
as your love beams from those dark eyes, 
I reach up to feel my messy hair,
I swing my legs from bed to floor 
with thoughts of combing my wayward locks.
You grab my arm and pull me back 
to lay my head upon your chest. 
We lay there silent in our bed,
no sounds are heard except a sigh 
exhaled from my satisfied breath.

9-28-19

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Date: 10/28/2019 6:21:00 AM
Beautiful. First poem I read in the morning and tempted to go back to bed. Kind wishes, Kai
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Date: 10/27/2019 9:43:00 AM
A beautiful write, of two lovers in love, what could be better than that? Another gem from your pen Connie, I enjoyed this one!
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Date: 10/15/2019 10:33:00 AM
Refined and fine, I'm grateful because its beautiful, great lines with fire, connecting me like a wire, shows the glory of your hand and the power of your mind. An excellent piece my friend.
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Date: 10/1/2019 1:16:00 PM
A FAVE, Connie. This one moved the earth under my feet.!!? Love Panagiotaxxx
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 10/1/2019 2:56:00 PM
Oh, thank you so much Panagiota. I promise to get back to you asap. My best friend's sister is dying from a fall so I need to rush over to see her today. I truly appreciate the Fave my friend. Thank you so much! xxoo
Date: 9/30/2019 12:38:00 PM
Human life would be a failed experiment but for the range of expression we are capable of sharing, including ones hidden but surely felt, and expressed to nobly in this poem. Your pen has special ink.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/30/2019 2:29:00 PM
Thank you very much Mark. So nice to hear from you. Aloha, Connie xxoo
Date: 9/30/2019 9:32:00 AM
How wonderful it is to be so in love, Connie. There's nothing more appealing than a "deep, sexy voice," but your man has many more charms. You have created a feeling of romance so perfectly! Enjoyed your poem, a fave for me. Love, Carolyn
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/30/2019 10:32:00 AM
One of those charms is he loves to cook for me. : ) I really appreciate it that you like this enough to fave Carolyn. Thank you my friend. Hugs, Connie xxoo
Date: 9/29/2019 7:57:00 PM
I really enjoyed this beautiful, romantic poem, Connie. :)
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/29/2019 11:21:00 PM
Thank you very much Evelyn. xxoo
Date: 9/29/2019 4:16:00 PM
Stayed up late to watch England clobber USA in the Rugby World Cup? You deserve a sleep-in undisturbed except by love! Aloha! Rico
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/29/2019 4:49:00 PM
Thank you Rico. I will have to catch excerpt of it on the news. Aloha, xxoo
Date: 9/29/2019 10:10:00 AM
This is absolutely beautiful Connie. A true love poem. You should give him this for valentines day. Love it. God Bless, JB
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/29/2019 4:47:00 PM
I may Judy. Thank you for such a lovely comment. xxoo
Date: 9/29/2019 9:28:00 AM
Such a beautiful way to wake up. Romance is flowing from your pen in this wonderful write :) hugs
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/29/2019 4:46:00 PM
Thank you Sandra. I always enjoy your poetry. xxoo
Date: 9/29/2019 8:30:00 AM
Charming, heartfelt..your poem depicts a special bond, Connie--not much much more is needed in life.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/29/2019 4:45:00 PM
We don't need many words, we just read each other's minds. We have a great psychic connection. Thank you Vijay. xxoo
Date: 9/28/2019 11:45:00 PM
Great way to begin the day. Very romantic. Hugs.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/29/2019 2:42:00 AM
Thank you very much Victor. I have a lot of contests to check out before they close. Have a lovely week. xxoo
Date: 9/28/2019 11:39:00 PM
G'day Connie … your romantic verse is certainly artistic Connie. It's such a pleasure to read them - thank you Connie - Lindsay
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/29/2019 2:41:00 AM
Thank you Lindsay. I was up most of last night so I am getting a late start today. Have a great week. xxoo
Date: 9/28/2019 11:37:00 PM
This is beautiful Connie. I enjoyed reading it and know your husband enjoyed it. God bless you sweet friend
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/29/2019 2:40:00 AM
Thank you Regina. I appreciate your sweet message. xxoo
Date: 9/28/2019 9:55:00 PM
Connie, your poetic artistry paints a beautifully tender, intimate portrait of such a deep and satisfying love. Inspiring poetry, my dear friend. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/28/2019 10:11:00 PM
Thank you very much Susan. Have a great weekend. xxoo
Date: 9/28/2019 8:44:00 PM
A loving scene in your words Connie, a couple in love who are devoted to each other. Tom.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/28/2019 9:05:00 PM
Hearts remain bound to each other. Thank you Tom. xxoo
Date: 9/28/2019 8:35:00 PM
Very nice Connie! :)
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/28/2019 9:04:00 PM
Thank you Heidi. Have a great weekend! xxoo