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You Are Pure :: No More Sin

You are pure ~ Poetic Type:: Mid-Swap Under tree, he saw that man there. None knew why man arrived, from where. A bum look, none talked, except him. Appeared to be wise, can't be grim. Every one says man is crazy First look he felt no, not zany. Asked man can he get back his grin, as since retired he's hooked to sin. Man assured him, nothing to scare. Under tree, he saw that man there. Man asked about sin, he whispered. Bring your sin, be free, said wizard. Rushed home to bring sin for the man took sin kept in bag, coat of tan. Man opened bottle took two drops of water; on his head it stops, Said you are pure, your new name is ... Man assured him, nothing to scare. ~x~x~ No more sin ~ Poetic Type: Hidden Rhyme or Blind Rhyme With assurance returned home gladly. He manly opened the freezer door, no more sin; took out bottles of Rum. Learned thumb rule well; he put water drop on top of each bottle; whispered you have no clue; from today you are pure, you're Tonic- your new name. Happily and randomly picked up one bottle in awful voice he started singing drinking tonic.......with a throat so sore before he dropped from chair loudly.

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Date: 12/23/2019 3:09:00 PM
you wrote this very well, two very good poems..
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Pratap Roy
Date: 12/23/2019 11:24:00 PM
Thank you for your appreciating words. God bless you. Merry Christmas.

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