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You Are Phenomenal My Dearest

I never realized how lifeless I was until I met you,
I pleasantly remember molding myself around helplessly when I saw you,
I also remember hopelessly acting immoderately so that you could notice me,
Another futile attempt which barely made any difference,
My life was a total failure after the other,
Living each day purposelessly,
Problems kept piling up each minute,
But when you came around and acknowledged how perfect we could be together,
My whole life changed after so long- real long,
You gave me hope,
You strengthened me,
I consider all that honorable,
You are phenomenal my Dearest!

Copyright © Kabutha Paul Hempstone | Year Posted 2017

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Susan Ashley Date: 12/28/2017 10:47:00 PM Such a soul-baring write Hempstone. Elegant and enthralling, your beautiful words held me captive from start to finish. Belated congrats on your win.. ~Susan Login to Reply

James Horn Date: 10/11/2017 9:19:00 AM In life this is some who we need, Knowing there are faces to feed, And should be planting each seed That we know and was well-agreed. Login to Reply Kabutha Paul Hempstone Date: 10/12/2017 10:53:00 AM Indeed Sir..Thank you so much

Kay Roberts Date: 10/9/2017 6:40:00 AM Congrats on your win :) Login to Reply Kabutha Paul Hempstone Date: 10/12/2017 10:53:00 AM Thanks

Gregory Richard Barden Date: 10/8/2017 3:32:00 AM Hempstone - sincere congratulations on your well-earned win, my friend, and blessings for more such recognition of your wonderful writing talents! Keep up the great work! Login to Reply Kabutha Paul Hempstone Date: 10/8/2017 6:13:00 AM I really appreciate Sir Gregory

Constance La France Date: 10/7/2017 5:12:00 PM Congratulations on your win with this outstanding poem! Login to Reply Kabutha Paul Hempstone Date: 10/8/2017 1:15:00 AM Thank you so much Broken Wings!