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You Are Not Mine But Yours Is This Line

You are the HOPE, hope is mine You are not mine, but yours is this line I Know Hope as your substitute is not sound But then, it's only one I have found You are the HEARTBEAT, Heart is mine You are not mine, but beat is yours all the time I know Heart with others Heartbeat is not sound But then, it's only one that keeps me in bound You are the SMILE, Lips are mine Smile is not mine, but on lips yours is this line I know Yours borrowed Smile on my lip is not real joy But then, pretence is only way to smile even for fake joy ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ ( Placed 5th in Members Contest - Clever analogies, if you please by Thvia Shetley)

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/2/2011 6:12:00 AM

While stopping by to read some of your amazing poetry I would like to thank you for your comments on my poetry. Your words are always appreciated Hitendra. May the sun always shine down upon you and fill your soul with inspiration. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/12/2010 5:57:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/2/2010 8:08:00 PM

wow, Hitendra, what a wonderful poem you penned with this one, reminding me of those love songs sung for love that cannot be. A BIG congratulations to you. You really rocked it in this contest. LUv, Andrea

Fabiyas M V

Date: 12/1/2010 10:08:00 AM

Beautiful! Many many congratulations,Hitendra,my Indian friend

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/1/2010 7:04:00 AM

An awesome write, Hitendra. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/1/2010 5:08:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Hitendra in Thvia's contest. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/30/2010 7:51:00 PM

Congrats Hitendra on your big win in Thvia's contest with this excellent entry my friend.. enjoy a top notch win tonight with luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/13/2010 9:16:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your poetry this beautiful morning Hitendra. May your day be full of inspiration. Love, Carol

Dr Hitendra Mehta

Date: 10/13/2010 3:09:00 AM

@Linda... U r ever so encouraging... Thnx 4 your appreciative comments.... Luv/Best wishes always....

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/12/2010 12:47:00 PM

Hope Heart Lips ...all wonderful qualities to strive for in life... to keep the flow going ... enjoyed your wonderful rhyme today my friend.. with luv..