Dr Hitendra Mehta Poet Rhyme

You Are Not Mine But Yours Is This Line

You are the HOPE, hope is mine
You are not mine, but yours is this line
            I Know
Hope as your substitute is not sound
But then, it's only one I have found

You are the HEARTBEAT, Heart is mine
You are not mine, but beat is yours all the time
             I know
Heart with others Heartbeat is not sound
But then, it's only one that keeps me in bound 

You are the SMILE, Lips are mine
Smile is not mine, but on lips yours is this line
            I know
Yours borrowed Smile on my lip is not real joy
But then, pretence is only way to smile even for fake joy   

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( Placed 5th  in Members Contest - Clever analogies, if you please by Thvia Shetley)

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Carol Sunshine Brown June 2, 2011 at 6:12 AM While stopping by to read some of your amazing poetry I would like to thank you for your comments on my poetry. Your words are always appreciated Hitendra. May the sun always shine down upon you and fill your soul with inspiration. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick December 12, 2010 at 5:57 PM Congratulations on your win..Sara

Andrea Dietrich December 2, 2010 at 8:08 PM wow, Hitendra, what a wonderful poem you penned with this one, reminding me of those love songs sung for love that cannot be. A BIG congratulations to you. You really rocked it in this contest. LUv, Andrea

Fabiyas M V December 1, 2010 at 10:08 AM Beautiful! Many many congratulations,Hitendra,my Indian friend

Carolyn Devonshire December 1, 2010 at 7:04 AM An awesome write, Hitendra. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown December 1, 2010 at 5:08 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win Hitendra in Thvia's contest. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 30, 2010 at 7:51 PM Congrats Hitendra on your big win in Thvia's contest with this excellent entry my friend.. enjoy a top notch win tonight with luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown October 13, 2010 at 9:16 AM I enjoyed reading your poetry this beautiful morning Hitendra. May your day be full of inspiration. Love, Carol

Dr Hitendra Mehta October 13, 2010 at 3:09 AM @Linda... U r ever so encouraging... Thnx 4 your appreciative comments.... Luv/Best wishes always....

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 12, 2010 at 12:47 PM Hope Heart Lips ...all wonderful qualities to strive for in life... to keep the flow going ... enjoyed your wonderful rhyme today my friend.. with luv..