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On my mind all day
Crave your caress through the night
Obsession drives me insane

But hunger persists
Trying to sweep from my mind
All consuming addiction



AP: 3rd place 2020

Submitted on August 20, 2017 for contest OH I MISS YOU sponsored by CECELIA HOPKINS-DREWER

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/24/2020 1:59:00 AM
loveliest loving poem
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/24/2020 10:03:00 AM
Thank you, Mahtab ~
Date: 4/11/2018 6:36:00 PM
Nicely done, Line. I think this would have been a great one to do in acrostic style!!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/11/2018 8:31:00 PM
Yes, Andrea. Thanks for your visit.
Date: 9/23/2017 9:23:00 PM
Brave!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 9/23/2017 10:29:00 PM
;-)

Book: Reflection on the Important Things