Eileen Manassian Poet Sedoka

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You Are My Spring

"You are my fair Spring
your love invigorates me
life comes to full bloom in you"~~
I lie here, forlorn
Oh, that I could have known then
you'd be my fiercest winter

Eileen Manassian

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Ronald A. Williams August 17, 2017 at 7:39 AM Ok Eileen Manassian August 20, 2017 at 1:20 AM Thank you.

John Hamilton August 1, 2017 at 11:51 AM A great example of so much being said with so few words, well done! Eileen Manassian August 20, 2017 at 1:20 AM Thank you, John. Brevity helped get the feeling across on this write.

Dean Wood July 17, 2017 at 7:47 AM This is beautiful Eileen! Nice turn at the end, I did not see that coming. - Dean

Heidi Sands July 16, 2017 at 6:19 AM What a great poem this is, with a powerful message at the end! :)

Funom Makama July 12, 2017 at 9:58 AM Excellent and profound. You have that unique skill of beating the peak. This is a wonderful stuff, always beating our expectation. Can wait to jump to your next page.

Paul Callus July 12, 2017 at 3:41 AM This is excellent, Eileen...and that ending is superb! Hugs // paul

Richard Lamoureux July 11, 2017 at 9:38 AM You are skilled in the art of romantic!

Joanna Daniel July 10, 2017 at 8:58 AM Amazing tanka, Eileen, a fave:) plus, I'm also saving those lovely images:) Eileen Manassian July 10, 2017 at 5:24 PM You are welcome, dear. I'm so glad that you like it. :) Blessings.

Connie Marcum Wong July 10, 2017 at 3:29 AM This is superb!!! ; ) Eileen Manassian July 10, 2017 at 5:25 PM Thank you, sweet Connie! I'm so glad you were able to point out that omission in the last line. Hugs :) Please feel free to comment any time on things I might have missed. Hugs

Andrea Dietrich July 9, 2017 at 7:55 PM wow, Eileen, that last line you put on this one is exceptionally well thought out! Great pictures to illustrate this too. My vacation was a lot of fun and now it's BACK to WORK Eileen Manassian July 10, 2017 at 5:26 PM I'm glad you had a good time, dear. It's always good to get away for a while. Brings back...SANITY. :) You looked lovely in your pics. Glad you liked this piec

Sara Ella July 9, 2017 at 12:37 PM So much heart in this one <3 Love this Eileen Eileen Manassian July 10, 2017 at 5:26 PM Thanks for your kindness, Sara. It is much appreciated, dear.

Tim Smith July 9, 2017 at 10:51 AM I like this very much Eileen Eileen Manassian July 10, 2017 at 5:27 PM I'm glad you liked it, Tim. It's good to try different forms now and again. :)

Demetrios Trifiatis July 9, 2017 at 10:32 AM Romanticism blooms more and more in you as time passes by dear, Eileen! Superb! Eileen Manassian July 10, 2017 at 5:27 PM :) That's a sweet thing to say, my dear Demetrios. Filakia

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart July 9, 2017 at 6:38 AM So well penned lovely. I felt the temperature drop reading this. Hugs xomo! Eileen Manassian July 9, 2017 at 7:02 AM Thanks, Maureen. Promises made in the heat of love seems to melt in the hot of trial. Thanks for the visit, dear.