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You Are My Spring

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"You are my fair Spring your love invigorates me life comes to full bloom in you"~~ I lie here, forlorn Oh, that I could have known then you'd be my fiercest winter Eileen Manassian

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Ronald A. Williams

Date: 8/17/2017 7:39:00 AM

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/20/2017 1:20:00 AM

Thank you.

John Hamilton

Date: 8/1/2017 11:51:00 AM

A great example of so much being said with so few words, well done!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/20/2017 1:20:00 AM

Thank you, John. Brevity helped get the feeling across on this write.

Dean Wood

Date: 7/17/2017 7:47:00 AM

This is beautiful Eileen! Nice turn at the end, I did not see that coming. - Dean

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/16/2017 6:19:00 AM

What a great poem this is, with a powerful message at the end! :)

Funom Makama

Date: 7/12/2017 9:58:00 AM

Excellent and profound. You have that unique skill of beating the peak. This is a wonderful stuff, always beating our expectation. Can wait to jump to your next page.

Paul Callus

Date: 7/12/2017 3:41:00 AM

This is excellent, Eileen...and that ending is superb! Hugs // paul

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/11/2017 9:38:00 AM

You are skilled in the art of romantic!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/10/2017 8:58:00 AM

Amazing tanka, Eileen, a fave:) plus, I'm also saving those lovely images:)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/10/2017 5:24:00 PM

You are welcome, dear. I'm so glad that you like it. :) Blessings.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/10/2017 3:29:00 AM

This is superb!!! ; )

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/10/2017 5:25:00 PM

Thank you, sweet Connie! I'm so glad you were able to point out that omission in the last line. Hugs :) Please feel free to comment any time on things I might have missed. Hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/9/2017 7:55:00 PM

wow, Eileen, that last line you put on this one is exceptionally well thought out! Great pictures to illustrate this too. My vacation was a lot of fun and now it's BACK to WORK

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/10/2017 5:26:00 PM

I'm glad you had a good time, dear. It's always good to get away for a while. Brings back...SANITY. :) You looked lovely in your pics. Glad you liked this piec