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You Are Mine-Best Love Poem

Best Love Poem #3 Contest Sponsor: SKAT A You're my mate to my soul, You're my line to my life. How grateful I am, To finally be your wife... The sanctity of my core, Could not ask for more, Cuz' it's you that I adore, So let's close the door. Let's just forget Monday's blues, And how my heart used to be so bruised, But since I met you, My life has been improved, -I've never been so seduced. Predictions of all that is to come, For you are mine, and we are one. We fell in love when we were so young, Twenty years ago, look how far we've come. Through out the last two decades, From childhood and then classmates, We've become perfect bedmates, With maybe a few little headaches. Your gentle brown eyes, chills up my spine, For finally it is our time, let's fly, Sometimes I lay and start to cry, For I am yours, and you are mine. Written By: Laura Urbaniak Date: September 26, 2015 2nd Place Winner

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Date: 11/21/2015 11:05:00 AM
Congrats on the win :) God bless
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Date: 11/21/2015 3:54:00 PM
Thank you very much :)-lu *smiles*
Date: 11/21/2015 8:08:00 AM
Sigh, this is awesome, congrats on your win and the young love that lasted :)
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Date: 11/21/2015 9:51:00 AM
Thank you Edward, you are so sweet :)-LU xx *smiles*
Date: 11/21/2015 7:30:00 AM
Oh so sweet and loving, Laura.
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Date: 11/21/2015 9:51:00 AM
Thank you James :)-LU *smiles*
Date: 11/21/2015 3:17:00 AM
Isn't that beautiful!....puppy love turned out to be your one true love! May you have many more romantic years together. [I see you don't mind giving out your age:)))] ~ Congratulations on a deserved podium finish! Regards // paul
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Date: 11/21/2015 9:50:00 AM
Thank you Paul very much! Have a great day :)- LU xx *smiles*
Date: 11/21/2015 1:14:00 AM
I so much love this Laura, a true love poem that flows without unnecessary jaw breaking words... congrats on the win...hugs
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Date: 11/21/2015 9:49:00 AM
Thank you very much for your kind words :) -lu xx *smiles*
Date: 11/21/2015 12:24:00 AM
Hi Laura:) Congratulations on your placement. ThanXs for supporting my contest. <3 Love SKAT
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Date: 11/21/2015 9:48:00 AM
Thank you so much SKAT :) Have a great day-lu

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