You Are Always On My Mind: A Note From Your Stalker

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Please read this with a light heart and in the humorous way it is intended. I know if this truly happens, it is no joking matter. For You Are Always On My Mind Poetry Contest Sponsored by Jay Narain

You Are Always on my Mind: A Note From Your Stalker Today I saw you leaving I watched you pull away Then I jumped into my car And followed you all day You are always on my mind You are always on my mind I love the way you dance Like no one is watching you And how you make funny faces Like your curtains aren't see through You are always on my mind You are always on my mind Tell me…that you'll never cut down your back yard tree Give me…give me one more chance in your bathroom to peek And I'll take a little peek. You are always on my mind You are always on my mind.

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David Crandall

Date: 6/9/2024 5:50:00 PM

Haha, you bring a new meaning to "you are always on my mind".

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/3/2024 10:25:00 AM

Haha I love this. Sadly these types often take it s step further. Women undressing where anyone can see. That's pretty foolish!

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 6/2/2024 4:51:00 AM

Dear Crystol, your stalker poem is pure comedic genius! I loved the playful tone juxtaposed with the creepy subject matter had me laughing out loud. Your clever wordplay and cheeky rhymes bring such a delightfully twisted humor. Capturing obsession through that iconic earworm chorus is an inspired touch. Bravo on this wildly entertaining and clever piece - your wit and creativity truly shine! Good Luck on a well-deserved poem. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel

Crystol Woods
Date: 6/2/2024 7:43:00 AM

Oh I'm so glad you got a good chuckle from this! It's a Hobbie of mine to write and perform parodies of popular songs lol. I do a Christmas themed parody at our staff party every year. Seems to go over well! Ty for stopping by Daniel! <3xo

Tom Woody

Date: 6/1/2024 8:11:00 AM

Stalkers bite! I can't even fathom being a celebrity and having to deal with stalkers, many of whom are mentally disturbed. Nice poetic tongue in cheek take

Crystol Woods
Date: 6/2/2024 7:44:00 AM

Thanks Tom! I think it's safe to say any stalker is mentally disturbed yea? Lol xo