Chetta Achara Poet Senryu

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You Are a Black Hole

the weight
of your expectations
crush me


 "A black hole is a hungry beast ... It swallows up everything too close, too slow or too small to fight its gravitational force." ~JoAnna Klein/Dennis Overbye

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Kim Rodrigues December 25, 2021 at 7:51 PM Congratulations on POTD! A great haiku!

Christuraj Alex December 20, 2021 at 10:55 PM Indeed, a great haiku. I am able to feel the weight. Congratulations!

Debra L Brown December 20, 2021 at 7:01 PM Congratulations on POTD, A lot of truth in few words. Blessings ~ Debra

Regina Mcintosh December 20, 2021 at 4:52 PM Wonderfully wise. God bless you and Congrats on POTD. Love, Gina

Eve Roper December 20, 2021 at 3:02 PM great verse, congratulations on POTD

Alexis Y. December 20, 2021 at 1:46 PM Wow! Chetta, Your poem is so powerful and true.Congratulations on getting the of the day. It was deserved. Have a nice day-Alexis

Valsa George December 19, 2021 at 7:59 PM Crisp and pithy ! Great haiku and well deserved honor. Chetta, Congratulations !

Brandy Nicole December 19, 2021 at 7:44 PM That weight can be overwhelming at times, which is not a good feeling at all. No one should ever be in a "Black Hole". Your thoughts touch my heart so deeply. Congratulations Chetta, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy

Warren Doll December 19, 2021 at 4:20 PM Chetta, just wonderful. Congratulations on POTD~ Warren

Jan Allison December 19, 2021 at 1:34 PM powerfully penned, many congrats on POTD:-) hugs Jan xx

Jeanne Mcgee December 19, 2021 at 1:21 PM Such power in so few words. Well done Chetta. Congrats on your POTD

Constance La France December 19, 2021 at 1:16 PM Chetta, wonderful, so deep and thought provoking and congratulations on your POEM OF THE DAY honor ~ love and serenity _Constance

Heidi Sands December 19, 2021 at 11:02 AM Congratulations for POTD :)

Eve Roper December 19, 2021 at 10:49 AM Chetta, congratulation on your POTD. Happy Holidays

Vijay Pandit December 19, 2021 at 9:31 AM Congrats on poem of the day. Splendid write--succinctly done.

L Milton Hankins December 19, 2021 at 8:52 AM Congratulations on your P.O.T.D., Chetta. I think we have all experienced that at one time or another. Good Senryu!

Anitha Jayasankar December 19, 2021 at 8:44 AM Hearty congratulations on your POTD Chetta... Awesome title... My son often talks about black hole to me... Loved the expression... God bless.. ~ Ani

Mike Gentile December 19, 2021 at 8:40 AM Chetta, congratulation on your POTD honors! Right to the point!!!

Connie Marcum Wong December 19, 2021 at 8:29 AM Wow! This is a powerful expressive piece Chetta. Congratulations on having it honored with POTD! Mele Kalikimaka! Blessings xxoo

Malabika Ray Choudhury December 19, 2021 at 8:03 AM Congratulations. Powerful Senryu. BW ~ Mala

P.S. Awtry December 19, 2021 at 7:38 AM Back with congratulations on your POTD honors! -ps

Bill Baker December 19, 2021 at 7:17 AM Congrats on your poem being honored as POTD, Chetta. A situation many find on a day to day basis, Sometimes we can be our own black hole. Have a great day, Bill

Paula Goldsmith December 19, 2021 at 6:31 AM Congratulations on your POTD win. Your write "You Are A Black Hole" is a wonderful Senryu. Few words with much said. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................

Joseph May December 19, 2021 at 6:26 AM Congrats on POTD

James Study December 19, 2021 at 5:52 AM Great Senryu.

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