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You Are a Black Hole

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the weight of your expectations crush me "A black hole is a hungry beast ... It swallows up everything too close, too slow or too small to fight its gravitational force." ~JoAnna Klein/Dennis Overbye Image: Pixabay

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/25/2021 7:51:00 PM

Congratulations on POTD! A great haiku!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 12/20/2021 10:55:00 PM

Indeed, a great haiku. I am able to feel the weight. Congratulations!

Debra L Brown

Date: 12/20/2021 7:01:00 PM

Congratulations on POTD, A lot of truth in few words. Blessings ~ Debra

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 12/20/2021 4:52:00 PM

Wonderfully wise. God bless you and Congrats on POTD. Love, Gina

Eve Roper

Date: 12/20/2021 3:02:00 PM

great verse, congratulations on POTD

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/20/2021 1:46:00 PM

Wow! Chetta, Your poem is so powerful and true.Congratulations on getting the of the day. It was deserved. Have a nice day-Alexis

Valsa George

Date: 12/19/2021 7:59:00 PM

Crisp and pithy ! Great haiku and well deserved honor. Chetta, Congratulations !

Brandy Nicole

Date: 12/19/2021 7:44:00 PM

That weight can be overwhelming at times, which is not a good feeling at all. No one should ever be in a "Black Hole". Your thoughts touch my heart so deeply. Congratulations Chetta, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy

Warren Doll

Date: 12/19/2021 4:20:00 PM

Chetta, just wonderful. Congratulations on POTD~ Warren

Jan Allison

Date: 12/19/2021 1:34:00 PM

powerfully penned, many congrats on POTD:-) hugs Jan xx

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 12/19/2021 1:21:00 PM

Such power in so few words. Well done Chetta. Congrats on your POTD

Constance La France

Date: 12/19/2021 1:16:00 PM

Chetta, wonderful, so deep and thought provoking and congratulations on your POEM OF THE DAY honor ~ love and serenity _Constance

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/19/2021 11:02:00 AM

Congratulations for POTD :)

Eve Roper

Date: 12/19/2021 10:49:00 AM

Chetta, congratulation on your POTD. Happy Holidays

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/19/2021 9:31:00 AM

Congrats on poem of the day. Splendid write--succinctly done.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 12/19/2021 8:52:00 AM

Congratulations on your P.O.T.D., Chetta. I think we have all experienced that at one time or another. Good Senryu!

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 12/19/2021 8:44:00 AM

Hearty congratulations on your POTD Chetta... Awesome title... My son often talks about black hole to me... Loved the expression... God bless.. ~ Ani

Mike Gentile

Date: 12/19/2021 8:40:00 AM

Chetta, congratulation on your POTD honors! Right to the point!!!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/19/2021 8:29:00 AM

Wow! This is a powerful expressive piece Chetta. Congratulations on having it honored with POTD! Mele Kalikimaka! Blessings xxoo

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 12/19/2021 8:03:00 AM

Congratulations. Powerful Senryu. BW ~ Mala

P.S. Awtry

Date: 12/19/2021 7:38:00 AM

Back with congratulations on your POTD honors! -ps

Bill Baker

Date: 12/19/2021 7:17:00 AM

Congrats on your poem being honored as POTD, Chetta. A situation many find on a day to day basis, Sometimes we can be our own black hole. Have a great day, Bill

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/19/2021 6:31:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD win. Your write "You Are A Black Hole" is a wonderful Senryu. Few words with much said. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................

Joseph May

Date: 12/19/2021 6:26:00 AM

Congrats on POTD

James Study

Date: 12/19/2021 5:52:00 AM

Great Senryu.