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You and me
Were meant to be
We share a fire
Sweetest desire
In our hearts
Love never parts
Inside, the hope
Helps us to cope
Passion arises
With many surprises
Joy overflows me
Saying I am free
Mutual trust believes
With faith that relieves
Honesty completes
And never defeats
Like a warm embrace
Caressing my face
Feelings like these
Bring me to my knees
Joy inspires my thoughts
Tying doubt in knots
Arousing my spirit’s dreams
With a fervor that screams
Yearning to touch my soul
With feelings I can’t control
Intimacy touches down
Dancing all around
With tenderness and devotion
That is more than emotion

You and me
Hold the key
To hope, faith and love
Fitting together like a glove

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 11/24/2020 12:21:00 AM
well composed --Enjoyed
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Date: 10/26/2020 2:14:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work. Very passionate work. Sara
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Date: 10/22/2020 5:11:00 AM
The ending is so perfect and ties it all together in a poem of perfection. Many congrats on your win, dear Regina. ~ Elaine
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Date: 10/21/2020 8:55:00 AM
Gina, this is beautiful and touched my heart, great example for your couplet contest and I hope I can write you a poem worthy _Constance
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Date: 10/20/2020 3:57:00 PM
gorgeous little poem of your love, regina. A perfect model for us for your contest.
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Date: 10/19/2020 4:56:00 PM
Wow! So full of emotions, so touching! Love your poem. Hugs, Mala
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Date: 10/19/2020 11:48:00 AM
Such beautiful lines full of emotion and love , I love the simplicity of the short lines it is very effective and a joy to read:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/19/2020 8:37:00 AM
Your muse produced a fine poem with all the emotions required. Well done. ~~
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Date: 10/19/2020 6:14:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this delighting and delightful muse of yours... indeed inspiring. God bless you.
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Regina Mcintosh
Date: 10/19/2020 6:16:00 AM
Thank you for being such a inspiration and blessing lady :)
Date: 10/19/2020 6:08:00 AM
Enjoyed the sweet tone of these loving, happy verses, Gina.
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Regina Mcintosh
Date: 10/19/2020 6:15:00 AM
Just the feelings that I might have felt as a vulnerable young girl and they still beckon to me from my heart's whispers, where vulnerability still hopes to inspire my words. It's a blessing to write something so simple and yet so honest and full of feeling. Your thoughts are a blessing dear friend and yes, I am so happy
Date: 10/19/2020 5:56:00 AM
- Regina, this was beautiful :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Regina Mcintosh
Date: 10/19/2020 6:13:00 AM
Thank you sweet lady. God bless you

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