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You and I

You and I , everywhere. The dark , dense growth, wild and free You and I, tread softly to civilization. Ragged and coarse , in ill – lit caves Holding each other, around a fire. The threat of the unknown Screamed across ignorant skies. You and I were swept In great of terror. A modest hut and fields, a pond A tree bent low over it. You and I, toiled and reaped Turmoil and rewards. Our barn was full. This time, A never-ending abyss, an infinite mountain. Drown me. In gurgling steams and churning seas. Dripping candles and torrid winds Cannot sooth this agony, this ecstacy . You and I. In later places, new names New faces. You and I Still…

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Date: 8/16/2024 4:21:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/21/2016 10:41:00 AM
heartandsoul heartandsoul, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/22/2015 8:09:00 PM
HH :) stopping by to enjoy your poem. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 4/21/2012 8:27:00 AM
good work
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Date: 4/23/2012 10:58:00 AM
Thanks a lot :)

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