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You Absolute Beach

A windy walk through sand dunes I'd best hang on to my face There's no method in my madness I could disappear without a trace In fact my feet are sinking Now I've walked over to the sea This beach isn't all that friendly Certainly not to me

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David Kavanagh

Date: 8/19/2023 2:16:00 PM

I’ve a feeling you could’ve kept going with this one Dilly, now why were you wearing heels on the beach lol! Good fun, cheers David

Di11y Da11y
Date: 8/19/2023 2:50:00 PM

Haha I had my wellies on and of course my story is entirely true :D

Speaks Volumes

Date: 8/19/2023 2:09:00 PM

Definitely not a beach I want to go to. You planted a wonderful vision in the readers mind DD. Well Done.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 8/19/2023 2:51:00 PM

Same beach as the balancing stones, so not all bad :)