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Relinquished are the days of yesteryear, Thus for you, I shall cry just one more tear, I know in my heart that our love was true, Leaving you was the hardest thing to do. So in my heart, you will always remain, But I refuse to live a life of pain, Hence like the dew that leaves the morning grass, I'll do my best to not live in the past. Forever grateful for the time we shared, It was so obvious the way you cared, Moving on from here will not be easy, Memories of you will remain to be. The biggest part of me for all my days, You have shaped my life and my very ways.

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Date: 4/8/2017 2:54:00 AM
Hugs to my friend (((Budgie)))
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White Wolf
Date: 4/8/2017 10:15:00 AM
Is the pentameter alright in this do you think? /|\
Date: 4/6/2017 11:14:00 AM
At times, there are uneasy things we must do so as to move on in life. Read my poem I Shall Go.
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Date: 4/6/2017 5:33:00 PM
Thank you for your comment, I shall read your poem soon /|\
Date: 4/6/2017 12:02:00 AM
a difficult time captured in beautiful words, well written. super 7
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Date: 4/6/2017 12:56:00 AM
Thank you, James /|\
Date: 4/5/2017 5:38:00 AM
You write good sonnets. And this was no exception. I could feel the emotion in every word. You expressed your thoughts well in this write.Well done:-) Alexis
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Date: 4/5/2017 5:48:00 AM
Thank you for the compliment, Alexis /|\
Date: 4/5/2017 5:26:00 AM
Good Morning White Wolf. You do the Sonnet proud and true. This entry is stunning. Emotion is truly expressed and felt. Your words are beautiful. The theme is timeless for certain. Well done entirely.
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Date: 4/5/2017 5:46:00 AM
You are too kind, Lisa, thank you very much /|\
Date: 4/4/2017 4:38:00 PM
Hello White Wolf,your poem deserves more than a 7. In fact I will make it my fav. Nice to meet you.
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White Wolf
Date: 4/4/2017 6:52:00 PM
Thank you for such a wonderful comment, Darlene. And nice to meet you too /|\
Date: 4/4/2017 12:05:00 PM
Excellent sonnet White Wolf. It really captures the emotions. Enjoyed it immensely.
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Date: 4/4/2017 6:50:00 PM
Thank you so much, Frank /|\
Date: 4/4/2017 7:14:00 AM
Such a wondrous sonnet my friend, WW, deserves a 7+
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Date: 4/4/2017 6:49:00 PM
Thank you for visiting my page today, Demetrios /|\
Date: 4/4/2017 6:01:00 AM
A beautiful and enchanting love poem my friend. This felt good to read this morning.
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Date: 4/4/2017 6:15:00 AM
Thanks, Chris, for stopping by my friend /|\
Date: 4/4/2017 4:56:00 AM
Lovely poem Budgie <3
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Date: 4/4/2017 4:57:00 AM
Thank you very much, Sara /|\
Date: 4/4/2017 12:52:00 AM
Some memories are like blood and flesh which cannot be separated. I love the way you conveyed your thought. Excellent.
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Date: 4/4/2017 1:44:00 AM
Thank you, Afolabi /|\

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