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You:

Relinquished are the days of yesteryear, Thus for you, I shall cry just one more tear, I know in my heart that our love was true, Leaving you was the hardest thing to do. So in my heart, you will always remain, But I refuse to live a life of pain, Hence like the dew that leaves the morning grass, I'll do my best to not live in the past. Forever grateful for the time we shared, It was so obvious the way you cared, Moving on from here will not be easy, Memories of you will remain to be. The biggest part of me for all my days, You have shaped my life and my very ways.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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White Avatar
April 8, 2017 at 2:54 AM
Hugs to my friend (((Budgie)))
Wolf Avatar
April 8, 2017 at 10:15 AM
Is the pentameter alright in this do you think? /|\
Muideen Avatar
April 6, 2017 at 11:14 AM
At times, there are uneasy things we must do so as to move on in life. Read my poem I Shall Go.
Wolf Avatar
April 6, 2017 at 5:33 PM
Thank you for your comment, I shall read your poem soon /|\
James Avatar
April 6, 2017 at 12:02 AM
a difficult time captured in beautiful words, well written. super 7
Wolf Avatar
April 6, 2017 at 12:56 AM
Thank you, James /|\
Y. Avatar
April 5, 2017 at 5:38 AM
You write good sonnets. And this was no exception. I could feel the emotion in every word. You expressed your thoughts well in this write.Well done:-) Alexis
Wolf Avatar
April 5, 2017 at 5:48 AM
Thank you for the compliment, Alexis /|\
Ricci Avatar
April 5, 2017 at 5:26 AM
Good Morning White Wolf. You do the Sonnet proud and true. This entry is stunning. Emotion is truly expressed and felt. Your words are beautiful. The theme is timeless for certain. Well done entirely.
Wolf Avatar
April 5, 2017 at 5:46 AM
You are too kind, Lisa, thank you very much /|\
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 4, 2017 at 4:38 PM
Hello White Wolf,your poem deserves more than a 7. In fact I will make it my fav. Nice to meet you.
Wolf Avatar
April 4, 2017 at 6:52 PM
Thank you for such a wonderful comment, Darlene. And nice to meet you too /|\
Sheehan Avatar
April 4, 2017 at 12:05 PM
Excellent sonnet White Wolf. It really captures the emotions. Enjoyed it immensely.
Wolf Avatar
April 4, 2017 at 6:50 PM
Thank you so much, Frank /|\
Trifiatis Avatar
April 4, 2017 at 7:14 AM
Such a wondrous sonnet my friend, WW, deserves a 7+
Wolf Avatar
April 4, 2017 at 6:49 PM
Thank you for visiting my page today, Demetrios /|\
Green Avatar
April 4, 2017 at 6:01 AM
A beautiful and enchanting love poem my friend. This felt good to read this morning.
Wolf Avatar
April 4, 2017 at 6:15 AM
Thanks, Chris, for stopping by my friend /|\
Ella Avatar
April 4, 2017 at 4:56 AM
Lovely poem Budgie <3
Wolf Avatar
April 4, 2017 at 4:57 AM
Thank you very much, Sara /|\
Muideen Avatar
April 4, 2017 at 12:52 AM
Some memories are like blood and flesh which cannot be separated. I love the way you conveyed your thought. Excellent.
Wolf Avatar
April 4, 2017 at 1:44 AM
Thank you, Afolabi /|\
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