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I wanted to drown in your eyes, but you shut it down for me. I extended my hand to touch you, but you slapped it away from me. I desired to ease my mind on your lap, but your legs were too cold to hold me. I wished to talk to you for a while, but you were too engrossed in your life. I dreamt to walk by your side, but you were busy looking the other side. I wished to hold you in my arms, but you did not even lend me your palm. I wished to share my thoughts with you, but you kept all my words apart. I wished some advice of wisdom from you, but your words were no more left for me. I wished to stroke your hair to love you, but you entangled it leaving me aside. I requested a while for your smile, but your time was not there for a while. I looked upon you for someone mine, but in your heart there was someone divine. I am an innocent lamb to cast my spell, But you thought me a devil out of hell. I delivered my instructions for you to follow, but you make it sound so hollow. I thought you would wipe my tears, but you counted it as your fears.

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Date: 9/26/2024 11:47:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/22/2016 1:55:00 PM
ratandeep sharma, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/31/2015 11:03:00 PM
RS, enjoyed reading your tonight. Hope to see you active this coming year. Goodbye, 2015 --- Hello 2016. God Bless. SKAT
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Date: 7/7/2011 11:41:00 AM
What more could I ask for today? It is a beautiful day the sun shining and birds singing. Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us Ratandeep. Love, Carol
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