You

but heartbeats after or some countless years between your touch never leaves

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Regina Mcintosh

Date: 4/12/2025 5:47:00 AM

wonderful write. Love it. God bless you with love, Gina

Terry Miller
Date: 4/12/2025 7:07:00 AM

Thank you Gina

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/11/2025 12:24:00 AM

Pure romance. Love this

Terry Miller
Date: 4/12/2025 7:07:00 AM

Thank you Andrea

Valsa George

Date: 4/8/2025 8:43:00 PM

Some memories will be stamped in our hearts for ever. Even if the presence is not there, the feel will linger. Terry, your Senryu has conveyed so much !

Terry Miller
Date: 4/12/2025 7:07:00 AM

This is so true Valsa, thank you

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/4/2025 10:36:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful "You" write. Few words with much said. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a wonderful day/weekend writing away............

Terry Miller
Date: 4/12/2025 7:07:00 AM

Thank you Paula

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/4/2025 10:16:00 AM

Terry you say much with a few words.

Terry Miller
Date: 4/12/2025 7:08:00 AM

Thank you Kim