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You, and Only You

You, and only you That's all I want All I would ever need I'm sure you could find someone more then I will ever be and yet you choose to stay with me Even in the rain you put it in my brain that you love me and only me but how could that be? Because there are girls who are prettier and wittier and seem to have everything together but I always change, like the weather I was surprised when you decided to stay even on the grey days and the days where I just sit and cry you come and lay with me and stay, and in that moment I don't ever want you to leave So please don't leave but I need my room to breathe I need you so feed me with your love, all you have, so for one little moment I don't need to worry about you leaving me for one of those girls who have no personality so in reality I say with all my vocality Please just stay..... ~September, 23~

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Date: 11/2/2017 6:38:00 PM
Sweet verse, pleasant inspirational Lovely write :) Welcome to the Soup James
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Date: 9/27/2017 4:47:00 AM
Great first post...Welcome to soup
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Date: 9/24/2017 7:29:00 AM
Nice poem. Continue writing poetry.
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Date: 9/24/2017 5:56:00 AM
Hi Pailey, I really like how you have described the emotion of insecurity within this poem and then the positivity, well written. :))
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Pailey Gordon
Date: 9/24/2017 8:06:00 AM
Thank you!!
Date: 9/24/2017 12:40:00 AM
I find you work so thought provoking and it is true, how funny love is and how it makes you feel! For me I sometimes feel of unworthy of the honor to be loved. Am so happy be the only woman he desires. Please continue to write and express this feeling.
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Pailey Gordon
Date: 9/24/2017 1:15:00 AM
Thank you so much!

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