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You! If you held me close And you felt my heart You would feel it quake Quiver pound and, shake That's the sound love makes. The path love takes. Should not be fake Sometimes it's sad. And love hurts bad. Love once grew. One untrue. Then, love flew! But now, And how! YOU!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/30/2009 12:54:00 PM
excellent, I know that love quake feeling well and am so grateful....
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Date: 11/29/2009 5:50:00 AM
Such heartfelt words, Dane-Ann. So glad for the happy ending. Keep up the good work. Lightwalker
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Date: 11/29/2009 1:08:00 AM
Lovely poem. Short Beautiful and true. Thanks and keep writing more and more, Best wishes and love Ravindra
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Date: 11/28/2009 4:32:00 PM
Interesting presentation of the theme of love. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 11/26/2009 7:12:00 PM
Remarkable poem Dane Ann and u said it all in this lighthearted poem ... excellent tribute to the YOU in your life... and your tribute poem by MoonBee is well deserved .. u are a gracious lady... and helpful guide on the Soup.. we thank u for being u... blessings .. luv... hope your turkey day was wonderful... luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 11/26/2009 4:55:00 PM
I love happy endings, Dane Ann....and this appears to be one of those ! I enjoy your poems. -Robert
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