Yogyakarta

Yogyakarta*

(26/08/2011)

If only I could make it then,
To the place I call second hometown
To the city I long for four years
To the souls of my real relatives

Just to talk about it brings me tears
Where my best Eid-El Fitrs* took place
If only I could close my eyes and click my heels
I’d trade what I own to have the first pace
So I could go there again, and put smile on Dad’s face
To arrive at grandma’s place, to the city that is grace


* Yogyakarta is one of the cities in the Middle Java (I live in East Java). It’s my dad’s hometown and my second city to be called home.
* Eid-El Fitr is two days after we, Moslems did our fasting in one whole month. 
In Indonesia we have this tradition to ‘come home’ to our origin hometown in Eid-El Fitr, whether you are moslems or not, because of the holidays. And as described in this poem, I really miss that city I call home.

By: Dinda Minardi
For Michael J. Falotico's Contest "Close Your Eyes and Click Your Heels"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 12/30/2011 8:23:00 PM
Just want to say May you Have The Best Happy New Year, Dinda, and hopefully it's in Jogja! I myself live in Jakarta though my parents origin is not java. LoL, but my home is wherever my grandmother is and she's here ;) Have fun my dear!
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Date: 9/6/2011 7:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement Dinda. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/4/2011 9:24:00 AM
Great win,Dinda.Congratulations!
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Date: 9/3/2011 3:53:00 AM
hey Dinda congrats on your great win..David
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Date: 9/3/2011 3:02:00 AM
A Fifth Place Win Congratulations. CR
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Date: 9/3/2011 2:48:00 AM
Very nice poem Dinda, well done and congratulations on your win. Lee
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Date: 9/3/2011 12:14:00 AM
I loved your poem and the explanation behind it. Congratulations on your win Dinda
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Date: 9/2/2011 10:32:00 PM
wow~~~winning CONGRATULATIONS for you my friend~~~*-*jun-jun
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Date: 9/2/2011 7:22:00 PM
You made me miss a place I never saw... thank you for supporting my contest... with love Michael
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Date: 9/2/2011 7:09:00 PM
Congrats Dinda on your fantastic win with this wonderful write for the contest.. amazing lines of poetic art ...enjoy..luv..
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Date: 8/28/2011 2:05:00 AM
I know the feeling of missing one's home, dinda. I would want to go back to MY home and childhood. Good luck in the contest with this one.
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Date: 8/26/2011 3:31:00 PM
It would be wonderful "to come home" thanks for commenting on my prose~~
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Dinda Minardi
Date: 8/27/2011 11:35:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by, Constance. :)
Date: 8/26/2011 1:37:00 PM
very lovely flight of imagination. Yogyakarta seems to be a Sanskrit word. Yogya means proper and karta means a doer. The man who always acts poroperly, I know Java is much influenced by the Indian Civilization and culture. Dinda
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Dinda Minardi
Date: 8/27/2011 11:25:00 AM
Yes indeed, Dr. Ram. Because long time ago, Indian Merchants came to Nuswantara (cont. of many kingdoms, now Indonesia and Indo-China) to trade with people from China and other region. We also have Maha Bharata story, Rama Shinta, and hanoman. :))
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