Yin's Yang

blinded by the light unable to see the truth within the darkness John G. Lawless ©1/28/2019

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/29/2019 2:49:00 PM

another good one, my friend!

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 1/28/2019 5:24:00 PM

Yeah, I like this one very much - ambiguity is a favorite poetic element of mine, and this sweet onion has a couple of layers. Nicely done!

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/29/2019 11:23:00 AM

Ha - I LOVE Foghorn! I am totally a Warner Brothers cartoon guy, never cared much for Mickey Mouse and the Disney crowd, but Foghorn, Bugs, Sylvester, Daffy, all those Mel Blanc wonders - all I watched on Saturday morns! :-)

John Lawless
Date: 1/29/2019 7:28:00 AM

yeah, Greg, I often feel like the old cartoon rooster "Foghorn Leghorn"....."that's a joke son - a joke"..appreciate your insight and interest