Get Your Premium Membership

Yesterday's shade

Senior rage, spreads out Frustration, futility's hold.. World turn sun burning.'

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 9/11/2016 5:04:00 PM
I have to admit, I didn't quite grasp it until I read some of the comments but I won't beat myself up. I'm still learning. I'll be sure to check out more of your work here...
Login to Reply
Date: 6/2/2016 1:18:00 AM
hmmm..... intriguing write, Joe.
Login to Reply
Date: 4/25/2016 1:14:00 PM
There is a lot of frustration in life..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 3/4/2016 7:11:00 AM
Such a strong image you create in your senryu Joe :) Hope you are doing well
Login to Reply
Date: 2/29/2016 6:58:00 AM
Man this is a little dark. Deep, yes. But I'll try something else, whatcha got?
Login to Reply
Date: 2/28/2016 7:13:00 PM
Hi, Joe, thanks for reading a bit of my stuff today. I had to think up something about my name for that contest of PD's but truly I have had a few sleepless nights from Soup drama!!
Login to Reply
Date: 2/24/2016 4:10:00 PM
Oh many things come to light here Joe,,I'll go with nature?
Login to Reply
Date: 2/23/2016 5:50:00 PM
The burning image fits with senior rage. We'll all be seething in a few more years for SURE. It was good to see a new poem up.
Login to Reply
Date: 2/18/2016 11:41:00 PM
thank you
Login to Reply
Maverick Avatar
Joe Maverick
Date: 2/19/2016 3:05:00 PM
Good of you to visit Joe..'
Date: 2/18/2016 9:17:00 PM
Fascinating write Joe. Read it several times and the possible meanings still coming. I'm going with optimism and thinking yesterday's shade comes from the same thing as today's sunlight or vice versa
Login to Reply
Maverick Avatar
Joe Maverick
Date: 2/19/2016 3:07:00 PM
Very good of you to look me up Nathan thanks also for the compliment..'