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Yesterday--Today

*** YESTERDAY *** By; John Monteblanco Yesterday was another day, I dream of you under the rain. All I know is that my love is true and everything else is fake. Take my hand and venture into a distant land. No more doctors or medications, I’m the cure to your heart! Don’t let me go because I don’t know how to live without you. Is love obsessive? Is it cruel or am I the one who needs to change? Do I need to find a different route to your blossoming heart? Listen with your heart not with your ears. Can you hear my heartbeat from here? Look with your heart not with your eyes. Do you see the infinite blue sea called love? *** TODAY *** By; the Poet Destroyer Love is so discrete and open wide. Why must one make another cry? Yes your love was true. But, at times we must say good bye. Like the color gold that does not fade, your heart I will always treasure and hold. But, time stood still over our desert land. Now I have to move on in hopes you'll understand. I will always reminisce the romantic way you held my hand. I'll miss the way you embraced your love for me. Things just got sad after that one little fight. A day wont go by that I wont dream of you at night. Hopefully my river flows back into the open waves of your sea. But, for now I ask you to set my heart free. ~~~~It was an honor to work with our 14 year old poet John M.~~~~ (A Poet Destroyer Collaboration)

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Date: 2/4/2016 11:03:00 PM
everyday **SKAT**
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Date: 5/3/2013 7:26:00 PM
Hey there PD. just stopping by to say hi. I worked all afternoon on a poem for Frank and it SUCKS. I will keep at it but I think I'll end up posting a lousy poem tonight sometime!!
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Date: 9/30/2012 12:15:00 PM
PD. This is very beautiful and I enjoyed reading it very much. Thanks and I like your new picture. I also want to tell you that you can call me Lucy anytime. I have been called that all my life. Please chack your Soup Mail. Lucy
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Date: 6/7/2011 9:25:00 AM
A poem with tenacious integrity. wonderful! Thanks for commenting on many of my poems p.d. Now in sacramento and enjoying Cali!
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Date: 6/3/2011 10:03:00 PM
... * “It Would Fail Myself to Try I Believe * Whom Can Explain * The Rushing Inside The Veins * Not I * Yet Ow Sooo Very Beautiful. * Your Beauty * Flatters Me * Joy Unto My Heart Within Your Lovely Sweeet Words * Thank You * Such A Kind Everything Com * A Fave By A Queen of Poetics Majestic Beauty. * Hugs & Kissses * Kisssses & Hugs * Always & Forever * Luv * Sarah.” *
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Date: 6/3/2011 9:53:00 PM
* “Smile * Wishing to Gather The Right Words to The Light In Beauty I Find * Unique * Beauty * Inside Not Only This Romantic I Would Say * Amazingly Precious & Lovely Verse. * Yet Even More So to Find * What Words Amid Sincereties Truth to Describe * This Absolute Beauty Poured Into The Splendours of * “You * My Dear Sweeet Beautiful * Priceless LeeAnn.” ... cont}
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Date: 5/28/2011 4:09:00 AM
EPIC! Also, I Laugh my Ace Off when I read all your comments. I won't reveal too much about your secret love for Classical Music. Who is this kid? Talent with the Quill! Hey take a look at a poem I just posted Called Not Sofa Cool. I am quite sure you will laugh. Nobody is reading my Baptized in Equality poem...Do u suggest I change the Title? I poured my heart out in that poem...? oh well. Hey. I appreciate everything. We need to hit a colab-O. WhatDoyaThink? ~JOEY
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Date: 5/26/2011 5:26:00 AM
wow, so beautiful and talented....
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Date: 5/15/2011 3:09:00 PM
thankxx PD... am trying to encourage Constance as she has been deeply and severly hurt by all this crapola today... if I could come through the computer screen in my cell phone I certainly would... I posted my HOLLOW poem in a blog ... u might want to view the message at the bottom luv.. I see u got a simple one line answer from the addressee in your blog... such a shame.. where is TPS in all this .. ??? your BFF for ever ..and ever..hope the new Ezzelle and Royal are doing well and Irma too..
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Date: 5/9/2011 9:55:00 PM
Well-written my friend. Great collaboration too.
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Date: 5/9/2011 5:15:00 PM
this is a double ten to the two of you my friend.
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Date: 5/7/2011 9:58:00 AM
Hope u are doing fine P.D. my BFF and will be in touch via my cell phone once we are en route to Italy later tonight luv... two weeks of Heaven on Earth ..but mostly business ..oh... a lovely day today sunny and warm.. hope u are enjoying your time there too..luv.. read my new blog when u can ..thankxx your BFF forever for life.. and more..
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Date: 5/6/2011 12:31:00 PM
D . and John great poems ! Last one is my favourite . A few of my grandkids are writing and coming up with some good ones . Anne
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Date: 5/5/2011 9:36:00 PM
wow, PD he is only 14? What a nice thing for you to do. YOu both created a really lovely work of poetry here. It's great seeing you back here! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 5/5/2011 5:41:00 PM
Wow. Very good work from both of y'alls part. R.M.
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Date: 5/5/2011 4:49:00 PM
enjoyed the collaboration here P D, &thank you as always for your comments
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Date: 5/5/2011 4:27:00 PM
Great combination..Enjoyed reading..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
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Date: 5/5/2011 3:20:00 PM
Hey! That be some passionate 14 year old. I guess the kids are maturing faster these days. At 14 I was still in the "Star light, star bright, first star I've seen tonight." Enjoyed. Love, daver
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Date: 5/5/2011 2:09:00 PM
The two of you have complimented each others words perfectly... I shall have to check out this young Poet genious... MJF
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Date: 5/5/2011 11:58:00 AM
* "Very Beauitiful" * and a complete honor amid stirring and all to thus read * very talented for such a young lad and * "Your Beauty Is Always Sooo Clear" * i would only imagine that anyone whom can thus behold * "This Beautiful Truth I Find In You" * would ever hope for the flowing of *Your Beautiful Light" * back into their eternal heart and sea * i viewed Your lovely blog and * "You Are Sooo Endearing * & * Absolutely Beautiful Is Your Treasure" * hugs and kisses * kisses and hugs * sarah
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Date: 5/5/2011 11:16:00 AM
a great write, enjoyed reading this one. thank you for reading and commenting on Night Train Whistle.
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Date: 5/5/2011 7:36:00 AM
What a beautiful morning I am enjoying reading poetry here at PoetrySoup. I am happy to see yours among those which I am able to read this morning P.D and John. May the sun shine down upon you and bring joy into your life today and always. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/5/2011 5:37:00 AM
Hey there Pd, I absolutely love this collab and I will check out some of John's other work.. Really a cool piece you have here.. Props to the both of you :) Ps you were right it was morning when you commented on that write :) enjoy your day WNN
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Date: 5/5/2011 5:14:00 AM
I tired to post this to your blog but i couldn't read the CAPTCHA. I have been writing since I was a little girl as well about 14 or so I needed a way to escape I needed a way to vent my aggravation and frustrations. I had no parents or anyone to turn to so a pen and piece of paper were my friends. And someday I will have my name on a book not for money but to pass down to my children. Cory
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Date: 5/4/2011 10:04:00 PM
hey pssstop oh I mean pzzzzztop! I bet your pet hsark will love that name (lumba lumba)---thank you for the laugh!! it just sounds so crazy but honestly hmm that name could work well for a shark or is it a dolphin?? lol Lumba Lumba the pet shark of pzztop! I think they are long lost cousins of the Oompa Loompas lol--- haha ok I am being silly now-- sorry still no dolphins in sight... sweet dreeams to you pzzztop (this name is growing on me) :)
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