Yesterday

Yesterday, at the castle or was it a long time past?
All our lives we never met
Our dreams into reality we could make them last
Troubles now our lives are set. 
Seemed we were meant to meet 
So now to the fates we are in debt
Far behind now the guilt as our hearts in rhythm beat
Away from searching eyes since we met.

Now we will long for tomorrow for some peace
It waits for us to take hold and hold tight
Looks mean nothing as our mature eyes crease
As long as we hold each other through the night
Though the hours are passing, they rob us all
They’re still our friends while present.
Here we are, not knowing when we fall
To hold each other is why we were sent
Stay with me, I know you long for that call.

Oh woe the time passed, the hours now gone 
I grieve in my heart for that unmet one
Believe my words, my heart is true
In you I believe with feelings new
Yesterday at the castle when I met you.
© 3/02/2014 GG

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 3/16/2014 12:39:00 AM
Golden Girl...Your pen of solid gold .....poetic Royalty! 7 My best, chuck
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Date: 2/28/2014 11:38:00 AM
Absolutely brilliant. Thanks for making my day. I have found it pleasurable to always begin the weekend with Poetrysoup because poets like you and poems like this do not disappoint. Have a lovely weekend
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Date: 2/22/2014 5:29:00 AM
A marvelous song of love! Mature, real and true! It has touched my heart to the core! Thank you my dear Golden one! A 7!
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Date: 2/18/2014 11:23:00 AM
Wow! nice feeling you have well penned, "All our lives we never met", and "tomorrow for some space" .Acute piece. Loved always, my friend, bl
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Date: 2/16/2014 1:38:00 PM
Hi Mandy just back for a re-read of this little gem...David
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Date: 2/12/2014 7:49:00 PM
Wonderful write Mandy...I enjoyed the read...
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Date: 2/12/2014 9:11:00 AM
As I read this, I could just hear Sir Paul's voice singing. Good write Dandy Mandy!
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Date: 2/12/2014 8:05:00 AM
Nice. I enjoyed. visit my posts
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Date: 2/11/2014 2:27:00 AM
Mandy this is a wonderful read, quite mesmerising, very well done...David
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Date: 2/10/2014 6:18:00 PM
I enjoy the rhyming scheme and how this poem truly resounds yesterday. Congrats, Mandy!
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Date: 2/10/2014 7:07:00 AM
HI Mandy, Just called in to have a read and I found this one its a lovely poem :) I thoroughly enjoyed the read nicely done, thanks for your very kind comment on my poem it was much appreciated love Jayne x
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Date: 2/8/2014 12:43:00 PM
I'm glad I didn't have to judge this contest.. You did a great job and could just as easily have won top award. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/8/2014 2:45:00 PM
how lovely Joyce thank you so much for that .bless you love xx
Date: 2/8/2014 10:02:00 AM
Wow, so nice! I loved reading this one..Congrats on your win in the contest with this very beautiful poem, golden girl Mandy! hugs..
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Date: 2/8/2014 11:35:00 AM
aw thanks gautami love xx
Date: 2/8/2014 8:09:00 AM
Way to go with this great winner..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 2/8/2014 11:34:00 AM
Bless you sara xx
Date: 2/7/2014 6:15:00 AM
I like it. It took my thoughts to my own Prince Charming, the love of my life, and how wonderful life is when there is someone you love to walk these long and tiring roads of life to its end with love and companionship in tact...and then back to loneliness and dreams until death. Congratulations on being included among the winners. Very nice.
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 2/7/2014 7:35:00 AM
Thanks Dane Ann I do appreciate your visit xx
Date: 2/6/2014 5:16:00 PM
Mandy excellent pen love it so much angst congrats on placing hugs
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Date: 2/7/2014 7:35:00 AM
Thanks Shadow xx
Date: 2/6/2014 3:31:00 PM
I love how you went back to the castle again at the end, just as you had started it. a very nice one. I am not seeing this from the winners' list, so I don't know your placement. Anyway, I can see it has won. Big congrats.
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Date: 2/7/2014 7:36:00 AM
Thanks just an Hm but at least it was something Andy xx
Date: 2/6/2014 2:07:00 PM
A very nice win Mandy...enjoyed your poem a lot...congratulations..
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Date: 2/7/2014 7:36:00 AM
Thanks Donna xx
Date: 2/5/2014 6:26:00 PM
Very Nice Poem! Enjoyed it much…Thanks for sharing//Sinclair
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Date: 2/7/2014 7:37:00 AM
Thanks Robert I appreciate the visit xx
Date: 2/3/2014 4:56:00 PM
what a wonderful coincidence, i too had a amazing experience one day at a castle...not unlike this poem,,,which by the way is lovely....to my fav,,,
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Date: 2/7/2014 7:34:00 AM
who'd have thought it , thanks harry xx
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