Andreanna Escamilla Poet Free verse

Yesterday

Yesterday caught me thinking 
Of thoughts melodic and serene
Vivid in roused seance
Trembled navel
Full with anticipation 
From sacral to root
Drowned in downy bliss
Dissolved by whispers 
Within my hips 
Surveyed with gentle lips
Yesterday caught me thinking 
Of every salacious kiss

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James Inman June 17, 2020 at 10:32 PM A very intimate poem. It is often very difficult to move past relationships that we know are dead, especially in our dreams.

James Horn May 16, 2020 at 8:45 AM Yesterday did pass away while at home did stay soon soul started to stray then sins did cause dismay.

Thomas Wells May 15, 2020 at 6:24 PM The power of the poem seems to come from its suggestion of an erotic communion (perhaps belly dancing) with the dead. It seems like a memory of someone loved who is seduced back into being. This is excellent writing! Thanks, Thomas Wells

Anil Deo May 12, 2020 at 11:24 PM Well-controlled writing, expertly balancing word choice with "salacious" details. I am saddened that quality writing like yours - excellent length, not too long - are missed, & no comments posted on it until mine. Glad for this chance to read Andreanna's skilled writing. Never quit. Andreanna Escamilla May 12, 2020 at 11:41 PM I am humbled by your kind review of my work. Thank you for reading.