Yellowstone, 1995 Or Thereabouts

I can hear the water, 
	a giggle almost, 
	in the small cold spring 
	by which I sat
	that foggy morning, 
	sketchbook, pen, and watercolors in hand. 
	A weed with a single white flower 
	grew from the innards 
	of a half submerged, 
	humus-bound log 
	alive with neon-green moss. 
	A brilliant web 
	spun by a tiny jewel-orange spider
	laced the flower to the log. 
	I dipped my brush in the spring water, 
	washed it around in the appropriate colors, 
	painted the scene as best I could, 
	never coming close to capturing 
	the brilliance of flower, moss and spider.
	Only approximations of nature are possible.
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Guzzi Avatar
May 11, 2013 at 6:51 PM
True homage to the earth, a lovely personal verse. Thanks so much for the entry. Light & Love
Jordan Avatar
May 11, 2013 at 9:37 PM
Thanks, Debbie. A great competition... Jack
Jones Avatar
May 10, 2013 at 9:26 PM
Congratulations Jack...wonderful piece here...one of my favorites of yours
Jordan Avatar
May 10, 2013 at 10:28 PM
Thank you, Donna. I have fond memories... Jack
Hicks Avatar
March 9, 2013 at 6:14 PM
I've only been to Yellowstone once, but it was very memorable trip (though I was only about 6 or at the time). It's really a wide range of images in this poem, the jewel-orange spider sounds like something to see! Have you ever watched the 30 minute paintings of Bob Ross? I think you would enjoy his work seeing as how you're into nature paintings :)
Jordan Avatar
March 9, 2013 at 9:26 PM
It was, or is, a remarkable place, at every possible scale. The spider was just one of an overwhelming variety of beautiful things I saw. However, I managed to record this one. Jack
Dietrich Avatar
March 1, 2013 at 12:08 AM
gorgeous!! this is kind of the way I like to write free verse on those rare occasions I attempt it. I love this one. Have you entered it into Catie's free verse contest. I think it would be perfect for that one.
Jordan Avatar
March 1, 2013 at 7:37 AM
Why, thank you... I'll check out the contest. J
Jones Avatar
February 28, 2013 at 5:16 PM
Very nice Jack and how true. We can never come close to duplicating God's beauty
Jordan Avatar
February 28, 2013 at 8:52 PM
Even is a medium as "realistic" as photography. J
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