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Yellow Setting Sun

yellow setting sun end to nice warm winter's day.. gold full moon rises

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Mehnaz Veetil

Date: 1/28/2013 10:49:00 PM

nice image in this short haiku....enjoyed reading...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/28/2013 7:43:00 PM

one gold one comes up as the other comes down. NICE!

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/28/2013 2:18:00 PM

and with a nice warm winter's day, a beautiful Haiku...

Matthew Anish

Date: 1/28/2013 6:39:00 AM

The setting sun is soooo beautful. Nice poem! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Debbie Duncan

Date: 1/27/2013 6:27:00 PM

very nice images Sara, thank you for reading "family hair" your life story is interesting. It's funny how people say " oh she looks just like you" when you know the truth of it all . You have a blessed day Sara ;}

Stacey Behal

Date: 1/27/2013 1:15:00 PM

I like this HAIKU- Thanks for sharing. It's nice sitting aside watching the earth make precious movements. LEGANDWRITER.

Len Gasun

Date: 1/27/2013 1:48:00 AM

Great Haiku with great image my dear friend, Sara. I am so happy to read it and so much enjoyed. Thank you so much for sharing! love/hugs, Leonora

Eileen Manassian

Date: 1/26/2013 10:18:00 PM

Lovely, Sara. The sun and moon are both themes that delight me! Hugs

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/26/2013 9:50:00 PM

am enjoying this visual beauty Sara .. u painted a glowing picture with these words luv ,, thankxx for prayers and sweet comments to inspire me .. am on slow mend from my health crisis but grateful to read u again .. hope to be on more as health allows ..happy Sunday.

Kim Merryman

Date: 1/26/2013 6:23:00 PM

Nice haiku, Sara! Love, Kim

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/26/2013 4:43:00 PM

This is another one of your wondrously perfect writes my friend! I truly loved reading this amazing Haiku this evening! You have painted a wonderful image, one that I really enjoyed during this cold winter's day! I can't wait til we have some warmer days coming in the near future, it's been so bitter cold here lately! It has gotten down to the single digits some nights! Your poem is exquisite and very well written Sara, I love it, Great Work!!