Yellow Lily

Yellow Lily yellow lily smiles guiding my path through this life painting golden hope

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David Smalling

Date: 11/16/2010 6:00:00 AM

I feel a Van Gogh here, I feel a canvas on the poem of the soul, lifting for the light. Wonderful!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/7/2010 8:37:00 AM

Beautiful James, what a lovely smile, your poem takes me away to my daughters Lily smile. She can brighten my day with the shine of her smile. Like the Lily that is one of my favorite flower. Have a nice one.., p.d.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/7/2010 8:03:00 AM

A wonderful haiku. A nice write on life, James

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/7/2010 7:12:00 AM

Thank you for starting my day on this bright note, Jimbo! Excellent haiku. Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/7/2010 6:43:00 AM

Very expressive, emotive, and descriptive..I can just see the scene....Sara

Gert W. Knop

Date: 8/7/2010 6:30:00 AM

Oh what a lovely picture you've painted here, Jimbo! Some of my favourite flowers are the yellow and blue water Lilies....Enjoyed very much your Haiku! And thank you again for commenting 'Call of the Pidgeon'...Have a nice Sunday!...Gert