Yellow In the Sky

yellow in the sky coming from the twilight hours living in cat’s eye Russell Sivey

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Matthew Anish

Date: 7/25/2012 1:58:00 PM

Good haiku here! You stuck to the 5 7 5 form which is all to the good. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/25/2012 11:34:00 AM

This is just stunning Russell ;) what made you think of this? Hope your week is a good one thus far. Love Wilma

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/25/2012 11:16:00 AM

ohh russell.. this 'ku rolls off the tongue like butter...so lyrical when read out loud... "living in cat’s eye"..you should be proud, i am!..:) huggs!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/24/2012 10:09:00 PM

oh my new cat has that hue in his eyes as u wrote of Russell so vividly my friend.. it is amazing to watch that glowing eye follow us.. as your yellow sun im the sky.. another beauty from your gifted pen my friend.. luv

Mad Hu

Date: 7/24/2012 9:32:00 PM

nature's beauty beautifully described in few words