Yellow Awakening

Flaxen oars comb golden ripples as I set adrift into butterscotch fog-- my miracle has led me here Alone, enchanted by soft canary light from a distant Tuscan sun I look to the honey glazed horizon Leading me deeper into blonde bliss I follow the fire in my belly as it suffuses me with amber valor-- Neither dream nor destiny, as the wind carries the dandelions, soon reborn from a yellow chrysalis March 3, 2016 ~Photo #4

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Date: 3/14/2016 11:24:00 PM
Hi Sam, Congratulations on your awesome win. Love LINDA
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Sam Jameson
Date: 3/15/2016 5:33:00 AM
Many thanks :)
Date: 3/7/2016 3:04:00 AM
Great write, loved it ....Seren
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Sam Jameson
Date: 3/7/2016 4:50:00 AM
Thank you, Seren! I'm glad the words were able to connect-- hope to hear more of your thoughts in the future..enjoy your day.
Date: 3/6/2016 12:39:00 PM
this is a beautiful shining gem. Congrats on the win.
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Date: 3/7/2016 4:49:00 AM
That is a very kind compliment, Andrea. I am glad you enjoyed the read-- thank you for your comment..
Date: 3/5/2016 11:59:00 PM
Congratulations Sam on your win in the UNITED COLOURS: Yellow Contest! You deserve it! :) -HANS
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Sam Jameson
Date: 3/7/2016 4:48:00 AM
Thank you, Hans! I appreciate the comment.
Date: 3/4/2016 10:45:00 PM
Sam: Many congratulations on your WIN.
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Sam Jameson
Date: 3/4/2016 11:01:00 PM
Much appreciated, Sathya! Very nice of you to drop in with a handshake on the work-- hope you have a wonderful day!
Date: 3/4/2016 9:34:00 PM
Sam, yours is one ofthe best I have read. Congratulations on your well deserved win! #7
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Sam Jameson
Date: 3/4/2016 11:00:00 PM
Very kind of you to say, Connie. I'm thrilled that the work was able to communicate to you..always makes me happy to hear that. Thank you for your kind remarks-- I hope to hear more of your thoughts in the future :)
Date: 3/4/2016 8:04:00 PM
Beautiful! Big congrats, Sam!
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Sam Jameson
Date: 3/4/2016 10:58:00 PM
Thank you, Hija! Very nice to hear a new voice-- I'm glad the words were able to connect. Thank you for dropping by with your warm comment..much appreciated!
Date: 3/4/2016 4:11:00 PM
Sam, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Sam Jameson
Date: 3/4/2016 4:15:00 PM
Thank you kindly, luloo! I appreciate your warm congratulations :)
Date: 3/4/2016 2:10:00 PM
Congratulations Sam, good work
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Sam Jameson
Date: 3/4/2016 2:13:00 PM
Thank you, Charlie! I appreciate the handshake and the kind remark.
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