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Yellow

The heat of the Sun flushes your skin like a kiss; Soft tawny petals gently tickling your toes, Golden smiles fill the meadow. 5/9/13

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Date: 5/21/2013 9:06:00 AM
lovely piece, congrats on your win
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 5/21/2013 9:08:00 AM
Thank you Sara for the congratulatory comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie
Date: 5/21/2013 8:48:00 AM
Ahhh!! Enjoyed reading your colorful work..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 5/21/2013 1:12:00 AM
Many congratulations on your win Melani, well done xx
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Date: 5/21/2013 12:49:00 AM
Yours was a lot like Susan's tanka in yellow too!! I loved both of your sunny and pretty tanka!!! congrats.
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Date: 5/20/2013 9:02:00 PM
this is an awesome choice of YELLOW , for Andrea... Tanka me a color. CONGRATULATIONS.... XOX~ Linda
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Date: 5/13/2013 6:28:00 AM
nice tanka Melani...best wishes
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Date: 5/10/2013 4:47:00 AM
- A lovely poem to read, thank you! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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