Yellow-Fins

One by one
yellow-fins are gathering.
Their salty hearts gently filling 
with the indigo currents
of struggle -of living.
Tide treading the present...
back-stroking(grimacing) the past. 
Front-crawling into future's moaning crag.
Dorsal fin topped dreams and crimson cream 
never seem to last...
or do they?

The wicked wield wicked nets... squeezing tighter.
Calloused gaffs move in-greedily.
The joy of yellow fins is flayed... 
One by one, 
as foul minded sea lice gobble down
a million future suns...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 12/11/2024 6:31:00 AM
Anthony, congratulations on your poem being featured on the PS homepage. What an interesting treatment of an exceptional subject. Love the imagery. Great write!
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Anthony Biaanco
Date: 12/14/2024 12:43:00 AM
Thank You for having a look at my poem Chula
Date: 12/9/2024 8:32:00 PM
Anthony, as a lover of the ocean, I enjoyed your expression of life in the sea and mourned its demise. True admirers of the sea are rare in written form, thank you for this moment of joy!
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Date: 12/9/2024 4:22:00 PM
Wow, glad I come across this gem. It powerfully blends nature's beauty with the harsh realities of survival, using vivid imagery to convey both fragility and predation. I love the rhythmic flow of the ocean which reflects on the cyclical nature of life, exploitation, and the endurance of dreams. Wonderful write! ^__^ JCB
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Date: 3/10/2014 11:59:00 AM
Wow, I do need to read more of your poems, Anthony,......I have been missing out on some intriguing poems. I hate to only come by to thank you for my win in your contest, which is a great honor, but I promise, I will try to come by your poems more often, just for the pure pleasure of your work. Thank you very much! :)
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Date: 2/24/2014 6:26:00 AM
Awesome S
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Anthony Biaanco
Date: 12/14/2024 12:39:00 AM
Thank you Steve
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