Years of Time

"i carry your heart with me(i carry it in
my heart)i am never without it(anywhere
i go you go . . . "
                                   ee Cummings

my tiny heart skipped
in faint pulses of darkness
the day you closed your eyes of life
(my lips pressed against your cheek
as i tried to kiss you awake)

i heard your whispers of comfort
fading through my sleep
your heart's rhythm
living in the shadows of mine
(when my heart couldn't bear the pain)

through all of life's hurdles 
and endless pathways 
that left me shattered and breathless
(i've always felt you lift me up)
your hand on mine against my chest
carrying me along

these years of time 
have burdened me
and death again
has drawn a line
(tempting me to follow)

this fight that fate has given me
is not a battle i'll fight alone
(it's my turn to carry you)
your strength will see me through

for even in my weaker days
i still feel you near
lingering in every breath i take
(my heart still holds you here)

'without legs to stand upon you always carried me along, your heart in mine, now i fight against your killer, carrying your strength, my heart beating strong, with you still tucked inside"

November 3, 2019
Writing Challenge, November - Some Kind of Love - Poetry Contest
Sponsor, Dear Heart - Wiishkobi Ode
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Roper Avatar
November 19, 2019 at 10:21 PM
Many congratulations on your winning placement:-) hugs eve
Na Avatar
November 19, 2019 at 1:50 AM
well done on your win in the contest Sandra
Chiri Avatar
November 18, 2019 at 9:18 PM
Sandy congratulations on your placement!;)
La France Avatar
November 18, 2019 at 4:36 PM
Sandra, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this deeply moving poem and I love the quote on the bottom too !
Adams Avatar
November 18, 2019 at 4:38 PM
Thank you so much for your kind words the placement but most importantly for Hosting the contest Hugs
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November 18, 2019 at 1:59 PM
- Congratulations on a moving and great 3rd place in the contest, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Adams Avatar
November 18, 2019 at 4:15 PM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise :) hugs
Green Avatar
November 4, 2019 at 9:04 AM
There is an underlying strength in this sad but beautifully touching poem my friend. Never give up this fight, you have the power within to defeat whatever comes you way Sandy.
Adams Avatar
November 4, 2019 at 7:00 PM
Thank you so much my friend... she was my rock but taken from me at a young age...i literally remember her viewing and me trying to wake her...i kissed her, shook her, begged her, but she didn't wake up, yet i have always felt her with me... i have seen her...i will fight for her with her...strength in numbers and i have an army of angels, living and not behind me... thank you.... hugs
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November 4, 2019 at 6:49 AM
Straight from the heart--a touching, loving write..splendidly done Sandy..a winner for sure.
Adams Avatar
November 4, 2019 at 6:57 PM
Thank you so much my friend...when i was little and she passed, she often came to me in dreams....she was my rock, i always feel her.... hugs
Sands Avatar
November 3, 2019 at 11:28 PM
Excellent poem Sandra. Far reaching. Well done! :)
Adams Avatar
November 4, 2019 at 6:55 PM
Thank you so much Heidi :) hugs
There Avatar
November 3, 2019 at 10:48 PM
Stunningly beautiful piece you have written, Sandra...Brilliant, my friend. hugs
Adams Avatar
November 4, 2019 at 6:55 PM
Thank you so much my friend... this one is for my mom-mom who was my childhood rock...i have always felt her near me.. hugs
Hamilton Avatar
November 3, 2019 at 6:55 PM
This is such a great poem, very touching, after reading you and Constance I'm getting sad...gotta change the channel.
Adams Avatar
November 3, 2019 at 7:12 PM
of course you picked my sad one...my in depths of poetry was more upbeat... sorry to pull you in the depths of my sad piece...you know me and emotions... hugs :)
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