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Years of Time

"i carry your heart with me(i carry it in my heart)i am never without it(anywhere i go you go . . . " ee Cummings my tiny heart skipped in faint pulses of darkness the day you closed your eyes of life (my lips pressed against your cheek as i tried to kiss you awake) i heard your whispers of comfort fading through my sleep your heart's rhythm living in the shadows of mine (when my heart couldn't bear the pain) through all of life's hurdles and endless pathways that left me shattered and breathless (i've always felt you lift me up) your hand on mine against my chest carrying me along these years of time have burdened me and death again has drawn a line (tempting me to follow) this fight that fate has given me is not a battle i'll fight alone (it's my turn to carry you) your strength will see me through for even in my weaker days i still feel you near lingering in every breath i take (my heart still holds you here) 'without legs to stand upon you always carried me along, your heart in mine, now i fight against your killer, carrying your strength, my heart beating strong, with you still tucked inside" November 3, 2019 Writing Challenge, November - Some Kind of Love - Poetry Contest Sponsor, Dear Heart - Wiishkobi Ode

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Date: 11/19/2019 10:21:00 PM
Many congratulations on your winning placement:-) hugs eve
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Date: 11/19/2019 1:50:00 AM
well done on your win in the contest Sandra
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Date: 11/18/2019 9:18:00 PM
Sandy congratulations on your placement!;)
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Date: 11/18/2019 4:36:00 PM
Sandra, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this deeply moving poem and I love the quote on the bottom too !
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/18/2019 4:38:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind words the placement but most importantly for Hosting the contest Hugs
Date: 11/18/2019 1:59:00 PM
- Congratulations on a moving and great 3rd place in the contest, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/18/2019 4:15:00 PM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise :) hugs
Date: 11/4/2019 9:04:00 AM
There is an underlying strength in this sad but beautifully touching poem my friend. Never give up this fight, you have the power within to defeat whatever comes you way Sandy.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/4/2019 7:00:00 PM
Thank you so much my friend... she was my rock but taken from me at a young age...i literally remember her viewing and me trying to wake her...i kissed her, shook her, begged her, but she didn't wake up, yet i have always felt her with me... i have seen her...i will fight for her with her...strength in numbers and i have an army of angels, living and not behind me... thank you.... hugs
Date: 11/4/2019 6:49:00 AM
Straight from the heart--a touching, loving write..splendidly done Sandy..a winner for sure.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/4/2019 6:57:00 PM
Thank you so much my friend...when i was little and she passed, she often came to me in dreams....she was my rock, i always feel her.... hugs
Date: 11/3/2019 11:28:00 PM
Excellent poem Sandra. Far reaching. Well done! :)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/4/2019 6:55:00 PM
Thank you so much Heidi :) hugs
Date: 11/3/2019 10:48:00 PM
Stunningly beautiful piece you have written, Sandra...Brilliant, my friend. hugs
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/4/2019 6:55:00 PM
Thank you so much my friend... this one is for my mom-mom who was my childhood rock...i have always felt her near me.. hugs
Date: 11/3/2019 6:55:00 PM
This is such a great poem, very touching, after reading you and Constance I'm getting sad...gotta change the channel.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/3/2019 7:12:00 PM
of course you picked my sad one...my in depths of poetry was more upbeat... sorry to pull you in the depths of my sad piece...you know me and emotions... hugs :)

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