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My lips Taste the salt Of passion’s heat The nectar of our love Fresh on my tongue Our bodies yearning Always yearning, Never satisfied, We crave each other As a deep addiction Of two linked souls TLR 2-11-18

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Date: 5/29/2025 10:10:00 AM
Tom.. you write very well, had many I like as I just couldn't stop reading one after another. Fact you express in few words what takes me a sentence, I was impressed honestly. Great work well done!
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Steve Harvell
Date: 7/8/2025 9:21:00 AM
You seem be very good.. I'm same as inspiration just seem come out blue. Some mine little complex read but reality to life I do not let disturb me but eye opener to exactly what mankind is in soul. Change heart and you change one for greater good. Feel free to browse my inspiration to our existence.
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Tom Rutherford
Date: 7/6/2025 3:34:00 PM
Thanks for the kind words Steve… it’s a mystery to me how I do it sometimes. Just kind of let it flow. Keep on writing, it gets easier with time. Keep the creative spark!
Date: 8/26/2024 5:49:00 PM
The vivid imagery of words. It's a story sweet and to the point in your perspective. Very lovely free verse.
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Tom Rutherford
Date: 8/26/2024 6:11:00 PM
Thank you for the kind words… my lovely wife is my inspiration
Date: 8/26/2024 3:57:00 PM
A lovely wistful and passionate poem, Tom.
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Tom Rutherford
Date: 8/26/2024 6:12:00 PM
Thank you Franci, kind words
Date: 3/20/2019 8:07:00 AM
Is It Hot In Here?...Nice Passionate Poem Tom! Vickie Thayer
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Date: 4/1/2018 12:29:00 PM
Hello Tom I feel the passion of this poem. You did a goo job writing this poem. Have a nice day my friend.
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