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April-18-2024
Yellow, Yearn, Yet, Yesterday Words Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Constance La France

 

" Life is the story of men who have strived, won or failed and of hearts that keep yearning against all odds" ~ By Poet
Like a pearl locked in an oyster, You have sealed your heart, barring entry. What currents flow through your heart? What eddy churns and gyrates there? Do the thoughts of our love linger there? Does my image, to your mind ever return? Do you recall how we stood silent beneath the stars? How we then built an epoch in a glance! We so blindly loved each other. Like a phantom I followed you behind. To you alone my heart as offering I gave. Never suspected any force would tear us apart! But how Fate waited swift to smite, And how we had to part in anguish, Toppling down the sand castles we built, Leaving a heap of debris behind. I yearn for what went missing at some point, Somewhere in the long journey of life. Now each sunset is a reminder of our touch, And your laughter rings in my heart as a haunting echo. I know, there is an ocean between us now Yet I desperately yearn for your embrace. Do I not deserve a second chance? I yearn for you, missing so much. Will you once more open your heart, That I can enter it and nest within, To douse all my smoldering pain Until Death invites us to our grave

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Date: 4/22/2024 5:52:00 AM
Valsa, congratulations on you win in my contest with this beautiful and emotional write, I love the quote too, Constance
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Date: 4/19/2024 1:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Sara K
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Date: 4/19/2024 12:19:00 PM
- A wonderful poem, with deep feelings Valsa :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
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Date: 4/19/2024 10:13:00 AM
Congratulation on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely "Yearn" write. Have a great weekend with your win......................
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Date: 4/18/2024 8:46:00 PM
Dear Valsa, This fantastic poem is very moving as it describes the longing for a love that has sadly faded and the sorrow of trying to get it back. Love is gorgeous, yet it aches, it stings, and we shed tears over its sweetness. While it's natural to want what we want, we shouldn't summon anything that doesn't return it or even recognize it once we try. Despite the vast distance that separates, you yearn for the warmth of his embrace, he is surely so lucky as you crave his laughter as well. Best wishes for the contest
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Date: 4/18/2024 3:40:00 PM
such an emotionally descriptive poem about the yearning for a love that's somehow painfully dissipated over time...and the yearning to reclaim it. Such heartfelt words. The opening line to your beautiful poem says so much. Am faving. Best wishes with the contest, hugs, Sara
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Date: 4/18/2024 11:51:00 AM
what a deeply etched emotion what a poem ! You express yourself with such ease when it comes to pain and love,
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Date: 4/18/2024 11:09:00 AM
Wow, sentimental and nice poem. Loved the last two stanzsa.
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Date: 4/18/2024 8:57:00 AM
Love is such a beautiful thing, but the hurts, it's sour, we bleed on the beauty. Yearning is good but may we not call on what does not call our name in return or answer us when we call. "I know, there is an ocean between us now yet I desperately yearn for your embrace." I could feel the want. "Now each sunset is a reminder of our touch, And your laughter rings in my heart as a haunting echo." Oh Valsa, dear Valsa. I love it.
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Date: 4/17/2024 11:05:00 PM
Valsa, this is beautiful and touching, a very talented declaration, i loved the emotion difffused, thanks poet
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