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For the Yellow, Yearn, Yet, Yesterday Words Poetry Contest

Contest Sponsor: Constance La France

Yearn

"So I lived my life in a dream world For the rest of my days Just you and me walking hand in hand In a wishful memory" from It's Sad to Belong by England Dan & John Ford Coley How difficult a feeling it is to yearn for someone whom you know that you should not. They see you. You wonder if your cheeks burn when they stare you down; oh, the room feels hot! To yearn for somebody when you have on a wedding ring can fill you with some guilt. But if that somebody is a Don Juan, you have to think about the life you’ve built already with your spouse; you must resist his special style that sets your heart on fire. Think of all the women he’s surely kissed. You’re just a souvenir he would acquire. You feel obsessed, and want so to give in. Be strong. Don’t let him get beneath your skin.
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Date: 4/22/2024 6:08:00 AM
Andrea, congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautifully penned poem, love the quote too, Constance
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Date: 4/21/2024 8:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Very creative. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. Sara K
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Date: 4/19/2024 12:32:00 PM
- Back with a happy congratulations - Have a lovely weekend, Andrea :) - hugs
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Date: 4/19/2024 10:49:00 AM
Congratulation on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful  "Yearn" write/ending. Why do we let people  beneath our skin??? Yes, Be Strong... Have a great weekend with your win......................
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Date: 4/17/2024 12:21:00 PM
wonderfully expressed, andrea! best of luck in the contest...
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Date: 4/17/2024 11:15:00 AM
- Don Juan will fade with time...he can kiss as many women as he wants ... forget him, Andrea :))) - Lovely written :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 4/17/2024 9:57:00 AM
A great sonnet on the yearning to fling. Temptataions can be overcome with strong determination. Nice poem.
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Date: 4/17/2024 9:39:00 AM
A yearning desire for a fling, Very nicely done Andrea
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Date: 4/17/2024 8:40:00 AM
Dear Andrea, I love how your artistic verses are filled with the struggle of forbidden desire, a tug-of-war between longing and loyalty. In the crucible of temptation, you navigate the emotions, grappling with the allure of what could be versus the reality of what is. Andrea, may strength be your compass, guiding you away from the siren song of temptation and towards the sanctuary of fidelity. - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 4/17/2024 8:18:00 AM
Temptations abound, dear Andrea. But at least your ending is correct. Great sonnet. Best for a win.
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