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In the quiet night, I adore your face So lovely. even when breathing with grace. I yearn to kiss you, so tender and true, Whispering my sweet nothings as I knew. Dawn begins to expand as we embrace. I kiss her luscious lips, I yearn, hearts race. We feel the tender flame, our tangled vines, Stars twinkle softly, fade, and the sun shines. The multicoloured martins fly in song, Outside buyers are busy. prices strong. I go down and order morning good food. But for our taste coffee is freshly brewed. The balmy breeze entices us to swim. I yearn, admiring her figure so slim. Alas, our honeymoon is over soon, We go home. In love, we yearn for the moon.

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Date: 4/21/2024 8:17:00 AM
Back with congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Very creative. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. Sara K
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Date: 4/19/2024 9:53:00 PM
There are endless yearnings in us. We yearn our loved one's presence, embrace, kiss and sweet company. The description of your sweet honeymoon days creates a kind of nostalgia in me. A highly romantic write. Of course you are a master in composing romantic poetry. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 4/19/2024 12:54:00 PM
- Back with a happy congratulations, Victor :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
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Date: 4/19/2024 11:02:00 AM
Congratulation on your win. WOW!!! I enjoyed reading your beautiful/romantic  "Yearn" Rhyme write... Have a great weekend with your win......................
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Date: 4/18/2024 3:18:00 PM
Such a romantic, touching read dear Victor. I like the flow of the poem and the rhymes. You have expressed yearning so poetically well here. I especially love the last stanza, ‘We go home. In love, we yearn for the moon’. Beautiful. Good luck with the contest. I’m sure Constance will love it as I did. X :)
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Date: 4/17/2024 2:56:00 AM
- The longing speaks for itself, Victor :) - A beautiful and romantic poem :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 4/16/2024 2:02:00 PM
Victor, beautifully romantic.
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Date: 4/16/2024 1:27:00 PM
ahhh, so romantic, Victor!
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Date: 4/16/2024 4:20:00 AM
A soft, romantic touch flows so beautifully through the lines of your poem, dear Victor. Your true love will always dwell in your heart. Hugs
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Date: 4/16/2024 4:01:00 AM
such a poignant and heartfelt poem as you reminisce about the past with what I would guess is your departed wife and soulmate. I cannot even begin to fathom the emptiness you must feel. Yet, I can see where writing romance poems such as this one can fill the gap. The honeymoon lines at the end left me breathless. A fabulous contest entry, dear Victor. Sorry I missed reading your poem yesterday. Have a pleasant Tuesday, blessings Sara
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Date: 4/16/2024 3:53:00 AM
We yearn for the moon, i love that last line so much as well as your slight alliterations and how youv depicted yearning so well here with excellent rhymes and flow of lines so well articulated! So heartfelt! Pleasure reading this! Best wishes for the contest
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Date: 4/15/2024 10:14:00 PM
Love this romantic verse. Great write my friend
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Date: 4/15/2024 7:52:00 PM
Your romantic tale of sweet love is well composed and lovely, Victor. Best of wishes for the contest. :)
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Date: 4/15/2024 4:40:00 PM
Lovely "yearning" love poem, Victor. Good luck in the contest, my friend. Bill
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Date: 4/15/2024 3:23:00 PM
so well written; there is a sweet sensuality in the images, good luck for the contest
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Date: 4/15/2024 12:58:00 PM
Ahh!! Romantic lines penned in this one. Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your romantic side to us. Sara K
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Date: 4/15/2024 11:21:00 AM
You are super fantastic, you are not a wordy poet, hung up on language that just tries to impress. I call the refrigerator poetry. It impresses the poet but not the reader. You bring out our passions, Viictor—I find that so impressive. Love your write. Wishing you a win! Faving this beauty.)) Pangie xx
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Date: 4/15/2024 10:58:00 AM
Victor, the fire that burns in your heart for your love is eternal. It is evident in the evolution of your wonderful poem. Love endures via recollections, sheltered in the depths of your soul.
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Date: 4/15/2024 10:43:00 AM
lol yes keeping yearning for the moon dear Victor its beautiful so is your poetry !
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Date: 4/15/2024 9:12:00 AM
Yearning so sweetly. It's Spring, love in the air! B0l in contest~Anaya
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Date: 4/15/2024 8:02:00 AM
The Victor saga continues :)
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Date: 4/15/2024 6:40:00 AM
I like this poem, especially the surprise honeymoon comment at the end. May true love last forever. Your poems always have deep meaning.
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Date: 4/15/2024 6:27:00 AM
A yearn to kiss…so tender and true…her luscious lips… The multicoloured martins fly in song…a sweet write! Hugs ~ Kim
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Date: 4/15/2024 6:16:00 AM
Dear Victor, your yearn for your love will never grow cold, it shows as your poems evolve. Memories keep love alive, safe in your heart it survives…Beryl
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Date: 4/15/2024 5:47:00 AM
Filled with longing, love, and grace--your poem speaks from a romantic heart. Excellent, write.
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