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August 16, 2023

X -Y - Z words Contest

Sponsor: Constance La france

"The world stood still, My heart in jitters..." By Poet Quiet dusk! enjoying sunset glory in the horizon, on an evening of sky gold, gossamer twilight of the melting rays descending on the mountaintops... listen to homecoming birds twittering to their mates! I yearn for you, I yearn for watching this crimson nightfall together… I remember the holding of hands, when our eyes met in the shimmering light of daybreak, cascade of love sparkling in your eyes, The world stood still, my heart in jitters, The moment felt eternal! FIRST PLACE

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Constance La France

Date: 9/12/2023 5:49:00 PM

Mala, wonderful poem and congratulations on your win in my contest, love the quote, Constance

Valsa George

Date: 8/18/2023 8:33:00 PM

Hi Mala, back to your beautiful poem with congratulations on your well deserved win.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/18/2023 6:55:00 PM

A very beautifully nostalgic poem with "Homecoming birds twittering to their mates" - Congratulations!

Brian Sambourne

Date: 8/18/2023 1:39:00 PM

I agree with you, Malabika - we yearn for togetherness, for the light in a lover's eyes. Congratulations! Brian

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/18/2023 12:02:00 PM

Great imagery!a lovely write, Mala! Congratulations!

Christina Bowring

Date: 8/17/2023 10:52:00 AM

Such a beautiful, tender poem Malabika. Wonderful poetic imagery. Love the line,’cascade of love sparkling in your eyes’. Really enjoyed it.Thank you for sharing.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/18/2023 11:28:00 AM

Thank you, Dear Christina, for your kind visit, and awesome comment. Really appreciate.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/17/2023 10:32:00 AM

"Good Luck" on your "Yearn," it is a wonderful write/quote. I enjoyed reading this one. Have a great day writing away....................

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/18/2023 11:27:00 AM

Thank you, Paula. Appreciate your kind comment.

Valsa George

Date: 8/17/2023 5:58:00 AM

Lovely view of the crimson dusk and the romantic feelings it invokes. You are a wordsmith creating magic with words dear Mala. All the Best!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/17/2023 6:20:00 AM

Your inspiring words made my day, Dear Valsa. Wish I were really a wordsmith creating magic! Hope you are enjoying family-time with your sweet grand-daughter! Love and best wishes ~ Mala

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/16/2023 3:19:00 PM

Hello Mala, I miss a sunset over the water. to watch a sun set over the water is a beautiful site i miss. I do not see the sun rise I am too sleepy then. Love & Friendship\ Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/17/2023 2:34:00 PM

Hello Mala, I miss the sunsets that are over the water. That makes it more beautiful. Love & Friendship, /Darlene/

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/16/2023 4:01:00 PM

Yes, Darlene, I love to watch sunset over water too! Your description is making me dreamy! Thank you for your lovely comment. Love ~ Mala

Jay Narain

Date: 8/16/2023 11:35:00 AM

Nicely penned, GL in contest.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/16/2023 4:00:00 PM

Thank you, Jay. Appreciate your encouraging words.